(I know this needs work ... need some outside help, thkns)
Era/Year/Age/Epoch/Eon: The Feudal era
Location: Feudal Japan
Genre: Action, Fantasy, Adventure and maybe some romance
Source: Inuyasha anime/manga
Characters/Goals/Role: (original Inu characters are welcomed too!)
Good:
(me)Theeba: A half demon wolf and half human. She is trying to find the whereabouts of her father. All that she knows is that he left with a hunting party and none of them came back.
(me) Fang: Theeba’s companion (a white wolf) and life long friend, she was given to Theeba as a cub by her father and they never been separated.
(me) Arwen/Bowen: Archer’s that became demon hunters after their village was attacked and destroyed. They are killing every demon they come across, hoping that one day this hunt will lead to the demon behind that raid.
Bad:
(me) Nadil – King of Demons: He sets everything in motion, and hardly does anything on his own, but on some occasions ‘meet’ his adversaries and then leads them on a wild goose chase. He believes all humans/elves should be eradicated for they are a plague on the world.
Neutral:
(Merri) Sesshoumaru: A full demon and Inuyasha’s half brother (Both of Sesshoumaru’s parents were demons). He really doesn’t care what happens, just as long as no one ‘crosses’ his path.
Part 3
Things were peaceful when Naraku was defeated by Inuyasha and the others but; that peace was never meant to last …
One day while waiting for her father to come back with the hunting party, Theeba was worried about him for they were never gone this long. Days went passed and still they haven’t returned and she really grew uneasy, the others told her not to worry for this was not unusual for him to be gone. Theeba disagreed with them and ran off in trying to find them, her only companion was a white wolf – really rare to see alive now-a-days, for they were very uncommon to see.
On the other side of that world, a new demon rose to power and started to raise havoc on the peaceful world. He was a full demon – not a Hanyou that wanted to be a demon like Naraku. He was around him and learned everything he needed to know. The new threat’s name was Nadil, and before long other demons began following him and realized that they might have a chance after all.
The first major attack by Nadil was on a peaceful, defenseless village, which was destroyed in no time flat by the onslaught of the demon horde. Everyone in the village was killed except two siblings, Arwen/Bowen. They were out for their daily hunt, and returned to the carnage of their village and they both made a vow to kill every living/unliving things that did this to their home.
Nadil traveled to the farthest most parts of the land, recruiting many demons as possible that would listen to him. He really concentrated on the ‘free lance’ ones, for they would prove more useful for they ‘roam’ to every parts of the land.
Rules:
1) PM me if you want to join and include a link to your Character submission for my review. (I realize that most of you are from the old LA and those links are now gone ... so this is for the new submitted ones)
2) NO god moding (we are all the same here)
3) READ the posts and post according to your character surroundings – don’t just jump in and post something stupid and expect us to reply (think about your posts)
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Guest_Vincent Valentine_*
, Jan 07 2005 09:03 PM
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Posted 31 January 2005 - 09:53 PM
Yeah. Way, way too loose Vinny. 
Anyway, I know time is a commodity nowadays (hell, look how long it took me to reply to this), but yeah, the skeleton of a story is going to need a lot more detail in general, plus just fleshing out the plot points that are already there. Describe the days that she waits, or just the general life itself before all of thsi - there's a lot, PM me if you want more.
Anyway, I know time is a commodity nowadays (hell, look how long it took me to reply to this), but yeah, the skeleton of a story is going to need a lot more detail in general, plus just fleshing out the plot points that are already there. Describe the days that she waits, or just the general life itself before all of thsi - there's a lot, PM me if you want more.
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Posted 14 February 2005 - 08:18 PM
sorry for the late reply, but here ya go ....
Era/Year/Age/Epoch/Eon: The Feudal era
Location: Feudal Japan
Genre: Action, Fantasy, Adventure and maybe some romance
Source: Inuyasha anime/manga
Characters/Goals/Role: (original Inu characters are welcomed too!)
Good:
(me)Theeba: A half demon wolf and half human. She is trying to find the whereabouts of her father. All that she knows is that he left with a hunting party and none of them came back.
(me) Fang: Theeba’s companion (a white wolf) and life long friend, she was given to Theeba as a cub by her father and they never been separated.
(me) Arwen/Bowen: Archer’s that became demon hunters after their village was attacked and destroyed. They are killing every demon they come across, hoping that one day this hunt will lead to the demon behind that raid.
Bad:
(me) Nadil – King of Demons: He sets everything in motion, and hardly does anything on his own, but on some occasions ‘meet’ his adversaries and then leads them on a wild goose chase. He believes all humans/elves should be eradicated for they are a plague on the world.
Neutral:
(Merri) Sesshoumaru: A full demon and Inuyasha’s half brother (Both of Sesshoumaru’s parents were demons). He really doesn’t care what happens, just as long as no one ‘crosses’ his path.
Part 3
Things were peaceful when Naraku was defeated by Inuyasha and the others but; that peace was never meant to last …
One day while waiting for her father to come back with the hunting party, Theeba was worried about him for they were never gone this long. Days went passed and still they haven’t returned and she really grew uneasy, the others told her not to worry for this was not unusual for him to be gone. Her ‘step mom’ keeps reassuring her that Koga would be fine and not to worry, for he could take care of himself, Deep down Theeba fears the worse and can’t shake the bad feeling, she wishes for her long journey to end and make sure that her father (Koga) is alright. Theeba disagreed with them and ran off in trying to find them, her only companion was a white wolf – really rare to see alive now-a-days, for they were very uncommon to see. Her adventures bring her together with many unexpected ‘friends’, can she put her ‘solitary’ pride/ambition behind her and work in a group? Theeba dreams of her life with her father before the new ‘person’ came around, this person ‘smelt/felt’ different; even her father didn’t like it for it reminded him of someone in the past.
On the other side of that world, a new demon rose to power and started to raise havoc on the peaceful world. He was a full demon – not a Hanyou that wanted to be a demon like Naraku. He was around him and learned everything he needed to know. The new threat’s name was Nadil, and before long other demons began following him and realized that they might have a chance after all. Nadil traveled to the farthest most parts of the land, recruiting many demons as possible that would listen to him. He really concentrated on the ‘free lance’ ones, for they would prove more useful for they ‘roam’ to every parts of the land. Nadil has this persuasiveness that could make anybody follow him, just even a look into his eyes could make any sane person/demon fall prey to his way of talking.
There was a peaceful village that was never harmed or ever dared to be in the wars that were going on. The village stayed neutral in every aspect of the word, no one there was rude and was always hospitable to any and all visitors. This village dwelt in security just incase something happened, it only had two guards – which were elven archers, sibling to be exact. They were the jewels of the village, for it was their job to welcome and show the guests around, and to fend of all demons that approached. The first major attack by Nadil was on this peaceful, defenseless village, which was destroyed in no time flat by the onslaught of the demon horde. Everyone in the village was killed except two siblings, Arwen/Bowen. One day they went out to hunt for a family that was going hungry, but to their surprise when they returned – the whole village was nothing but a smoldering pile of burning wood and debris, so from that day on they both made a vow to kill every living/unliving thing that did this to their home.
Rules:
1) PM me if you want to join and include a link to your Character submission for my review. (I realize that most of you are from the old LA and those links are now gone ... so this is for the new submitted ones)
2) NO god moding (we are all the same here)
3) READ the posts and post according to your character surroundings – don’t just jump in and post something stupid and expect us to reply (think about your posts)
Era/Year/Age/Epoch/Eon: The Feudal era
Location: Feudal Japan
Genre: Action, Fantasy, Adventure and maybe some romance
Source: Inuyasha anime/manga
Characters/Goals/Role: (original Inu characters are welcomed too!)
Good:
(me)Theeba: A half demon wolf and half human. She is trying to find the whereabouts of her father. All that she knows is that he left with a hunting party and none of them came back.
(me) Fang: Theeba’s companion (a white wolf) and life long friend, she was given to Theeba as a cub by her father and they never been separated.
(me) Arwen/Bowen: Archer’s that became demon hunters after their village was attacked and destroyed. They are killing every demon they come across, hoping that one day this hunt will lead to the demon behind that raid.
Bad:
(me) Nadil – King of Demons: He sets everything in motion, and hardly does anything on his own, but on some occasions ‘meet’ his adversaries and then leads them on a wild goose chase. He believes all humans/elves should be eradicated for they are a plague on the world.
Neutral:
(Merri) Sesshoumaru: A full demon and Inuyasha’s half brother (Both of Sesshoumaru’s parents were demons). He really doesn’t care what happens, just as long as no one ‘crosses’ his path.
Part 3
Things were peaceful when Naraku was defeated by Inuyasha and the others but; that peace was never meant to last …
One day while waiting for her father to come back with the hunting party, Theeba was worried about him for they were never gone this long. Days went passed and still they haven’t returned and she really grew uneasy, the others told her not to worry for this was not unusual for him to be gone. Her ‘step mom’ keeps reassuring her that Koga would be fine and not to worry, for he could take care of himself, Deep down Theeba fears the worse and can’t shake the bad feeling, she wishes for her long journey to end and make sure that her father (Koga) is alright. Theeba disagreed with them and ran off in trying to find them, her only companion was a white wolf – really rare to see alive now-a-days, for they were very uncommon to see. Her adventures bring her together with many unexpected ‘friends’, can she put her ‘solitary’ pride/ambition behind her and work in a group? Theeba dreams of her life with her father before the new ‘person’ came around, this person ‘smelt/felt’ different; even her father didn’t like it for it reminded him of someone in the past.
On the other side of that world, a new demon rose to power and started to raise havoc on the peaceful world. He was a full demon – not a Hanyou that wanted to be a demon like Naraku. He was around him and learned everything he needed to know. The new threat’s name was Nadil, and before long other demons began following him and realized that they might have a chance after all. Nadil traveled to the farthest most parts of the land, recruiting many demons as possible that would listen to him. He really concentrated on the ‘free lance’ ones, for they would prove more useful for they ‘roam’ to every parts of the land. Nadil has this persuasiveness that could make anybody follow him, just even a look into his eyes could make any sane person/demon fall prey to his way of talking.
There was a peaceful village that was never harmed or ever dared to be in the wars that were going on. The village stayed neutral in every aspect of the word, no one there was rude and was always hospitable to any and all visitors. This village dwelt in security just incase something happened, it only had two guards – which were elven archers, sibling to be exact. They were the jewels of the village, for it was their job to welcome and show the guests around, and to fend of all demons that approached. The first major attack by Nadil was on this peaceful, defenseless village, which was destroyed in no time flat by the onslaught of the demon horde. Everyone in the village was killed except two siblings, Arwen/Bowen. One day they went out to hunt for a family that was going hungry, but to their surprise when they returned – the whole village was nothing but a smoldering pile of burning wood and debris, so from that day on they both made a vow to kill every living/unliving thing that did this to their home.
Rules:
1) PM me if you want to join and include a link to your Character submission for my review. (I realize that most of you are from the old LA and those links are now gone ... so this is for the new submitted ones)
2) NO god moding (we are all the same here)
3) READ the posts and post according to your character surroundings – don’t just jump in and post something stupid and expect us to reply (think about your posts)
