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[Zythe]

There's already a topic about what you want the new Zelda to be like. There's a forum called Art Works for posting fanfiction in. Also, go here if you really like fanfiction: www.FanFiction.net

[Trinbadman]

I have made up a new Zelda game for GameCube and it is called 'The Legend of Zelda: Bright Shadow of Death!' In this new Zelda game, Gannondorf has reawakend as a dark shadow and has overtaken the Light Temple and has absorbed the powers of light and has become the Bright Shadow of Death!

In this new Zelda game I've made up, there is the Temple of Dark Time and Fierce Deity's Castle! Not only that, you already know that there are three types of arrows which are: fire, ice, and light! But in this new Zelda game I've made up, there is a fourth type of arrow which is the shadow arrows! Also, that makes a pattern! And the pattern is: fire and ice (which are opposites) and light and shadow (which are opposites)!

Also, in this new Zelda game I've made up, unlike the Temple of Time which had the Master Sword in the pedestal which you pull out to become an adult, in the Temple of Dark Time, Fierce Deity's Sword is in the pedestal which you pull out to become Fierce Deity! Also, you already know that how you warp to the Temple of Time is that you play the 'Prelude of Light!' But to warp to the Temple of Dark Time, you play the 'Prelude of Darkness!'  

Another thing I've made up about this new Zelda game is that in this new Zelda game, there is the Iron Temple!  Also, there is no shadow arrows or an Iron Temple in any Zelda game!

Finally, in this new Zelda game I've made up, you only play this new Zelda game as an adult or as Fierce Deity! But when you complete Fierce Deity's Castle as Fierce Deity, that's when you fight Gannondorf (the Bright Shadow of Death) as Fierce Deity!

Ok, ok... Firstly, don't use exlamation marks instead of full stops. It's really annoying. Secondly, stop repeatting yourself. You've got "in this new Zelda game i've made up" five or so times up there. And you keep saying "Another thing is" and "Also". Other than that, no offence, but...The idea and story is bollocks. Heh, soz, but it had to be said.

[Zythe]

Yeah. It's choc-a-block with suckiness. Whoever wrote it (I don't know), has writing skills that leave much to be desired.

[lord-of-shadow]

It sounds as if you just want to take everything and make a darker version of it, throw in a few paradoxical things like a bright shadow, and then... well, that's all you really have.

[Vazor]

Add a wizard. Wizards make everything better.

[Vazor]

For the love of God, let the exclamation marks stop. Please.

Anyway, I've already been doing a story on the evil Triforce (http://www.lozmissinglink.cjb.net)

[Zythe]

Triforce is not good. It is whatever its owner is.

[Vazor]

Well, um...er...
Damn it.

[Zythe]

A fic is a fic. You could I guess do a fic about a solely evil Triforce with no good in it, formed by the three demons or something but... yeah. A waste of .cjb.net otherwise.