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[Kisseena]

My final project is a website about a book. My book is called The Chicken of the Family.

ANYWAYS. I need to have a read-aloud video of the book. I recorded myself reading it, BUT MY VOICE IS GOING AWAY so I sound terrible. But I don't have another time to do this.

 

ANYWAYS. Here's the video. Tell me if it's dumb. Unless my voice comes back the audio probably won't get any better. Unless you think I should read something differently. 

 

 

Also, this is the website:

cmirandaENG311.weebly.com 

 

All I have done is the front page but feedback would be fab. I'll let you know when I update it so you guys can keep looking at it.

This is aimed for children in first, second, and third grade.

There will be some teacher parts, but those will be labeled. 

 

FANKS GUYS.

[wisp]

On the page where she says, "I am not a chicken," I would open the picture in an image editing program and erase the sentence at the top. I would leave the part where she says "I am not a chicken" but maybe that's just me. I would also erase the text on other pages where it's just part of a sentence showing. It's kind of distracting and makes it look a little unfinished, IMO. Other than that, I think the video looks good!

[deep]

The website looks surprisingly nice. Clean, orderly. Maybe I'm just used to terribad student websites, but you done good.

[Kisseena]

On the page where she says, "I am not a chicken," I would open the picture in an image editing program and erase the sentence at the top. I would leave the part where she says "I am not a chicken" but maybe that's just me. I would also erase the text on other pages where it's just part of a sentence showing. It's kind of distracting and makes it look a little unfinished, IMO. Other than that, I think the video looks good!

 

I don't have a picture editing program on my Mac. T_T

Unless iPhoto can magically take away the words.

 

 

The website looks surprisingly nice. Clean, orderly. Maybe I'm just used to terribad student websites, but you done good.

 

Fank you. :B

I took every class about computers & design in high school. I KNEW IT WOULD COME IN HANDY.

Edited by Kisseena, 17 November 2013 - 10:57 AM.

[wisp]

It doesn't even have something like Paint? O.o

Post the images here if you want and I will clean them up later?

[Kisseena]

Not that I know of.

Otay, I'll post them later today. I'm not at my computer at the moment.

[wisp]

You may also wanna post something to me on Facebook when you get them uploaded just to make sure I remember to check on it. I see FB notices on my phone but sometimes don't remember to check a specific thread. XD

[Kisseena]

FFFFFFF I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT THE PICTURES.

D:<

We have a peer-edit tomorrow. If anyone comments on it, I'll ask you to do the pictures for me. If not, I'll leave it like that. 

 

I'm working on the website now and I've finished two more pages. I've finished the read aloud page and the word wall page. Feel free to look around and let me know what you think about them! I'll keep updating throughout the night.

[Kisseena]

So I actually finished this up last night, so if you wanna c-c-c-c-check it out, you can!

I'm pretty proud of it.