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#1 Merahuta

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Posted 08 December 2004 - 10:50 PM

Name: Loki
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Race: Moth Demon

Age: Unknown ages very slowing, about 101

Height: 5ft 11”

Weight: 130 lbs.

Hair Color/Style: Poofy light blue hair that is silks to butt. His bangs which come to his chin neatly fall infront of his turquoise feelers, which are all poofy and cute like a moth’s.

Eye Color: Lightpink ^_^

Build: Although Loki does have alittle height. He is more lean then muscular. Fairly light colored skin and demonic turquoise eye make-up gives him a girlly look.

Strengths: Air and ground are his most powerful elements since he has moth wings that his can hide beneath the skin on his back. When they come out they do little damage to him.

Abilities: His is good at multiple powder mixes, like sleeping or a toxic powder. He is as well like many demons trained with a sword. He can hear things from far away and is telepathic.

Weaknesses: He can’t swim so he rarely except to bathe goes near water, even rain unnerves him. Any magic that is used on him stuns him and he is weak against them. His wings are very frail and break or tear easily. He is as weak as everyone else against his powders so if stolen from him they can me used against him. If you damage his feelers he isn’t telepathic, they help him in that ability. Although he is trained to fight he rarely does unless it is to save his own life or someone’s close to him.

Biography:
Loki was born in a large forest in the East. His parents were free-lancer (Meaning they really have no home they just wonder around) demons, both being moth demons, they enjoy the forests and the solitude. They raised Loki in that forest (The forest of many dreams) with no hatred towards humans or other demons. They saw nothing wrong with the human race, which had helped them out many years ago.

Loki was a curious child at five he ventured off in the night and go to the village that sat on the edge of the forest. No would see him of course, because he made sure to say near the tree line rather then go wondering in, which would be a death wish. Knowing humans hatred for demons was only powered by their fear of something stronger then themselves. But of course the youngster was caught by his father and he was lectured on what was right around humans and what was wrong.

His parents told him that humans did fear demons, so going near them would only raise that fear. But normally little children that didn’t hear of the other demons destroying villages and eating people would be okay with seeing them once and a while but to be seen fully would only cause a panic and they would come into the forest and attack them.

Loki took this to heart knowing it was true and rarely went near the village again.

Raising their son to be on a neutral basis with demons and humans was hard. Many demons saw moth demons as no threat and would pick on them regularly. But in the forest it was peaceful and kept them safe.

One evening was the hardest though. A demon by the name of Nadil came to them and asked if they would join him and help him take over the demonic world. Of course Loki’s parents denied joining him and sent him away.

Loki saw nothing to fear from Nadil and thought his ideas were good. Why were they so afraid of him? And Loki learned the hardest lesson of all. That a moth demon’s natural curiosity was it’s downfall. (^_^ note the saying “Like a Moth to a flame”)

As Loki grew his father began to teach him ‘powders’. These were a spell like creation that was in a powder form. They would enable him to put people to sleep, make two people in love, almost anything but kill someone. This would make him more powerful and help protect himself from other demons.

But as Loki’s free-time grew as he was coming to learning more then his own father he began to wonder near the village again. He decided to go into the village’s outskirts and as he very quietly walked along he heard a scream and took off running but ran into a young girl.

For the first time Loki felt wanted around a human, Naomi. When he hit her she didn’t scream and when some people came running to find out why the other woman screamed Naomi hid Loki. Loki eventually found out that Naomi like how he looked and how different he was then from everyone else. So Naomi and Loki became friend behind his and her parent’s backs. But they were still young…they didn’t understand the dangers they were causing.

One day after Loki’s daily lesson he hopped off happy as a lark and went to go see Naomi. The young girl was crying and told him to leave her alone because she wasn’t allowed to see her anymore. Loki begged her to stay his friend and she agreed because she cared for Loki as a friend.

Eventually Naomi began ageing when Loki stayed young. Loki’s feelings for Naomi had changed greatly and he walked to stay with her but he was 11(in moth years 20 technically in human years but he still looks eleven) when she was 17.

One Naomi’s 18th birthday she was married and they had a grand festival. Naomi invited Loki and he came.

At the party there was dancing and a great feast. Loki had disguised himself with a wrap around his head, and Naomi’s paint to hide his markings. A young boy came up to him, mistaking him for a girl and dragged Loki to the dance floor. Loki tried to get away but it was no use. The boy spun Loki around and the wrap came off and he hit the table with such a force the wooden bowl of punch fell over on his head and the paint washed away.

Now his demonic, looks shown to everyone, they freaked and Naomi’s mother demanded him to be killed. Naomi tried to protect the boy with no prevail and told him to run.

Loki ran as fast as he could and met up with his parents and he told them what happened. But before they could escape hunters ran into the woods and began to hunt down Loki and his parents. Running away they tried to get out and Loki’s father distracted the hunters while Loki’s mother took him and flew off. Loki knew from that moment he would never trust human’s again. They were backstabbers and their hated towards demons was stupid, because some demons weren’t evil.

As his mother and Loki got away, Loki wished he could take everything that had just happened back but he couldn’t and was stuck having to deal with what he had caused. But like a lot of people Loki blamed someone else for this problem. He blamed the humans, and that took the ease off his shoulders.

When Loki and his mother settled down again in another forest she taught him swordsman ship. She told him only to use it to protect and never to kill though. Loki followed his mother’s rules and learned as much as he could. Loki learned very little before they were caught by humans.

Caged Loki was forced to watch the human’s burn his mother. He hated it. This was the human’s fault all of it why were they doing this to him. He got out and began to attack the humans with the little knowledge of swordsman ship he had. Killing off two or three they ganged up on him and began beating the child to kill him but suddenly they were all killed by other demons and the demon Nadil came to help the boy up.

From that day forward Loki put all his trust into Nadil because he had saved his life. He then agreed to help Nadil and at 101 years old, after training himself with his powders and swordsman ship he had almost completely forgotten what his mother had told him, and his hatred towards humans had grown so much he enjoyed killing them. Although Loki might seem a killer he really began to avoid doing it, because it began to grow on his shoulders again. Loki is a more or less follow orders kind of person and now under Nadil he causes more trouble and will help Nadil to gain the power to rule over the demons.

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Posted 11 December 2004 - 09:09 PM

Hn. All right, you've got a decent start and basis, but pretty much all the story events in the bio need to be fleshed out a whole lot. There seems to be nothing here that you want to keep secret or hidden, so it would be a great boon to expand on these things - for example, the initial meeting with Nadil could use some more depth. Also, while the strngths and such are tied in nicely, could you use the bio to also explain the weaknesses, perhaps have him taught them by someone?

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Posted 11 December 2004 - 11:01 PM

Name: Loki

Race: Moth Demon

Age: Unknown ages very slowing, about 101

Height: 5ft 11”

Weight: 130 lbs.

Hair Color/Style: Poofy light blue hair that is silks to butt. His bangs which come to his chin neatly fall infront of his turquoise feelers, which are all poofy and cute like a moth’s.

Eye Color: Lightpink ^_^

Build: Although Loki does have alittle height. He is more lean then muscular. Fairly light colored skin and demonic turquoise eye make-up gives him a girlly look.

Strengths: Air and ground are his most powerful elements since he has moth wings that his can hide beneath the skin on his back. When they come out they do little damage to him.

Abilities: His is good at multiple powder mixes, like sleeping or a toxic powder. He is as well like many demons trained with a sword. He can hear things from far away and is telepathic.

Weaknesses: He can’t swim so he rarely except to bathe goes near water, even rain unnerves him. Any magic that is used on him stuns him and he is weak against them. His wings are very frail and break or tear easily. He is as weak as everyone else against his powders so if stolen from him they can me used against him. If you damage his feelers he isn’t telepathic, they help him in that ability. Although he is trained to fight he rarely does unless it is to save his own life or someone’s close to him.

Biography:
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Loki was born in a large forest in the East. His parents were free-lancer (Meaning they really have no home they just wonder around) demons, both being moth demons, they enjoy the forests and the solitude. They raised Loki in that forest (The forest of many dreams) with no hatred towards humans or other demons. They saw nothing wrong with the human race, which had helped them out many years ago. Loki’s parents had been in a terrible forest fire and the village not far from them got them out and the rest of the animals out of the forest to save them. Loki’s parents were in great debt to them and then promised they would not pre-judge humans.[/color]

Loki was a curious child at five he ventured off in the night and go to the village that sat on the edge of the forest. No would see him of course, because he made sure to say near the tree line rather then go wondering in, which would be a death wish. Knowing humans hatred for demons was only powered by their fear of something stronger then themselves. But of course the youngster was caught by his father and he was lectured on what was right around humans and what was wrong.

His parents told him that humans did fear demons, so going near them would only raise that fear. But normally little children that didn’t hear of the other demons destroying villages and eating people would be okay with seeing them once and a while but to be seen fully would only cause a panic and they would come into the forest and attack them.

Loki took this to heart knowing it was true and rarely went near the village again.

Raising their son to be on a neutral basis with demons and humans was hard. Many demons saw moth demons as no threat and would pick on them regularly, because the moth demon is a rare demon and use to have little defenses and are terribly weak agaist magic. But in the forest it was peaceful and kept them safe.

One dark rainy evening was the hardest though. A demon by the name of Nadil came to them and asked if they would join him and help him take over the demonic world. Loki’s parents sensed him and pushed Loki off into the trees so Nadil wouldn’t see him. They both knew that if Nadil saw him he would be able to talk the boy into going with him because children are naive so a child would agree but Adults knew better then to just join up with any demon.Nadil asked for their help to take over. Loki couldn’t understand why his parents were so worried about the demon seeing him. Of course Loki’s parents denied joining him and sent him away.

Loki saw nothing to fear from Nadil and thought his ideas were good. Why were they so afraid of him? And Loki learned the hardest lesson of all. That a moth demon’s natural curiosity was it’s downfall. ( note the saying “Like a Moth to a flame”)

As Loki grew his father began to teach him ‘powders’. These were a spell like creation that was in a powder form. They would enable him to put people to sleep, make two people in love, almost anything but kill someone. This would make him more powerful and help protect himself from other demons. During one of Loki’s lessons they were attacked by a demon. She was a water demon and beautiful at that. She pulled Loki into the water holding the young moth demon under to drown him because she could breath underwater.


Loki’s lungs screamed for air but he knew better then to inhale that would kill him. Struggling to get out he was suddenly set free as his father cut the woman’s arm off. The battle was small having Loki’s father the winner but Loki had passed out under the water. Loki’s father quickly brought him to the surface and began to perform an older version of CPR. Loki coughed up the water and shivered as he dad picked him up and carried him home. He use to enjoy the rain but now any thought of water bring back that memory so Loki tried his best to stay far from it.

But as Loki’s free-time grew as he was coming to learning more then his own father he began to wonder near the village again. He decided to go into the village’s outskirts and as he very quietly walked along he heard a scream because she saw a mouse but he thought it was because she saw him. Knowing that the other villagers would come Loki attempted to run but as he turned the corner he ran into a young girl. She looked at him and blinked a few times. She didn’t do anything except sit there wide-mouthed.

For the first time Loki felt wanted around a human, Naomi. When he hit her she didn’t scream and when some people came running to find out why the other woman screamed Naomi hid Loki. Loki eventually found out that Naomi like how he looked and how different he was then from everyone else. So Naomi and Loki became friend behind his and her parent’s backs. But they were still young…they didn’t understand the dangers they were causing.

One day after Loki’s daily lesson he hopped off happy as a lark and went to go see Naomi. The young girl was crying and told him to leave her alone because she wasn’t allowed to see her anymore. Her parents had seen her with Loki and knew he was a demon. They didn’t trust demons (of course) and wanted their daughter safe and far away from Loki. Loki begged her to stay his friend and she agreed because she cared for Loki as a friend. Naomi really didn’t want to leave Loki, she cared for him deeply and he was one of her only friends. She needed him there or her life would be nothing but gardening. Which is what the children in her age group did for the village.

Eventually Naomi began ageing when Loki stayed young. Loki’s feelings for Naomi had changed greatly and he walked to stay with her but he was 11(in moth years 20 technically in human years but he still looks eleven) when she was 17. He hated this, his love for Naomi was true and he wanted her to love him back but that was impossible. Mainly because a demon and human relationship was so horrible you could be killed for it. Loki didn’t understand why people would do that, if someone is in love they should be able to love who they want to.



It was four weeks before Naomi’s 18th birthday she met her fiancée. Loki spied on them because she had told him she couldn’t play that day. Loki hated the man, although he seemed okay for human standers, Loki knew that man would never protect her.

On Naomi’s birthday she was married and they had a grand festival. Naomi invited Loki and he came.

At the party there was dancing and a great feast. Loki had disguised himself with a wrap around his head, and Naomi’s paint to hide his markings.The party began at sun set and there was music and dancing. Loki watched Naomi and her husband dance and he was happy for her. Loki rather not danced because he never was taught how. But a young boy came up to him, mistaking him for a girl and dragged Loki to the dance floor. Loki tried to get away but it was no use. The boy spun Loki around and the wrap came off and he hit the table with such a force the wooden bowl of punch fell over on his head and the paint washed away.

Now his demonic looks were shown to everyone, they freaked and Naomi’s mother demanded him to be killed. Naomi tried to protect the boy with no prevail and told him to run.

Loki ran as fast as he could and met up with his parents and he told them what happened. His parents were very disappointed in Loki and tried to tell him what he did was wrong but they heard movement in the forest and began to try to escape. But before they could escape hunters ran into the woods and began to hunt down Loki and his parents. Running away they tried to get out and Loki’s father distracted the hunters while Loki’s mother took him and flew off. And as they flew the humans launched arrows at them. An arrow tore through Loki’s wing and his mother had to carry him. Loki knew from that moment he would never trust human’s again. They were backstabbers and their hated towards demons was stupid, because some demons weren’t evil.

As his mother and Loki got away, Loki wished he could take everything that had just happened back but he couldn’t and was stuck having to deal with what he had caused. But like a lot of people Loki blamed someone else for this problem. He blamed the humans, and that took the ease off his shoulders.

When Loki and his mother settled down again in another forest she taught him swordsman ship. She told him only to use it to protect and never to kill though. Loki followed his mother’s rules and learned as much as he could. It was difficult without his father around, his mother tried to fight back the tears of her loss many times as the subject was brought up. Loki was only on his third lesson when they were caught by humans. The humans had come in the middle of the night and took Loki and his mother from their sleeping trance and caged them taking them to their village.



The villagers set up a wooden pole and sticks around it, they had heard that demons were attack another village and assumed these were the demons. They were going to burn Loki and his mother alive and the mother went first to that Loki could grieve while watching him mother.

Caged Loki was forced to watch the human’s burn his mother. He hated it. Her cries rang in his ears as tears flowed form his pink eyes, why were they doing this to him? Loki’s sadness turned to rage and as they opened the cage door he got out and began to attack the humans with the little knowledge of swordsman ship he had. Killing off two or three they ganged up on him and began beating the child to death. Loki scream out in pain as a sword entered his shoulder and began burring itself deeper through his shoulder. He opened his eyes tried to hold back the pain when a black light engulfed the humans around him and they burst into a black flame and then turned to ash. Nadil and his team walked over to Loki and pulled the sword from his shoulder and helped him up. Nadil noticed his mother’s skeleton on the pole and then asked Loki if he would join his team. Loki agreed telling Nadil that he owed him his life.

[color="black"][size=2]From that day forward Loki put all his trust into Nadil because he had saved his life. At 101 years old, after training himself with his powders and swordsman ship he had almost completely forgotten what his mother had told him, and his hatred towards humans had grown so much he enjoyed killing them. Loki and four other demons were sent on a mission and burned down a village and killed all the people in it. Loki watched the people scream as they burned and the precious memories of his mother came back to him. Loki then began to avoid killing people because of his mother’s wishes. The guilt of the death of so many began to bog him down and he felt horrible. Loki isn’t proud of anything he as done after his mother’s death but he has now no choice, Nadil was making his move and Loki had to help.


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Posted 28 December 2004 - 11:51 PM

First of all, sorry about the tardiness. Between the last of Finals, the Awards, and Christmas, it's been nuts.

Anyway, much better, but it could still stand to use some details. A lot of what you added were just new events, and while that's great, all I need is freater depth to what's already there.

Keep it up!

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Posted 01 January 2005 - 07:18 PM

I'm sorry, I have to apologize for making you wait awhile for me to do this, but I am having trouble in school and I am grounding myself (yes...I know but I have to get off this computer and get onto school) from the internet until my grades are brought up. So I won't be able to keep up with the character. I'm sorry again, Merii.

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Posted 02 January 2005 - 11:38 PM

It's all right Meri, that's far more important. I'll leave this unlocked and if you so desire, you have permission to bring this back up. Just be sure to remind me. ;p

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Posted 02 March 2005 - 10:32 PM

Name: Loki

Race: Moth Demon

Age: Unknown ages very slowing, about 101

Height: 5ft 11”

Weight: 130 lbs.

Hair Color/Style: Poofy light blue hair that is silks to butt. His bangs which come to his chin neatly fall infront of his turquoise feelers, which are all poofy and cute like a moth’s.

Eye Color: Lightpink

Build: Although Loki does have alittle height. He is more lean then muscular. Fairly light colored skin and demonic turquoise eye make-up gives him a girlly look.

Strengths: Air and ground are his most powerful elements since he has moth wings that his can hide beneath the skin on his back. When they come out they do little damage to him.

Abilities: His is good at multiple powder mixes, like sleeping or a toxic powder. He is as well like many demons trained with a sword. He can hear things from far away and is telepathic.

Weaknesses: He can’t swim so he rarely except to bathe goes near water, even rain unnerves him. Any magic that is used on him stuns him and he is weak against them. His wings are very frail and break or tear easily. He is as weak as everyone else against his powders so if stolen from him they can me used against him. If you damage his feelers he isn’t telepathic, they help him in that ability. Although he is trained to fight he rarely does unless it is to save his own life or someone’s close to him. Loki also still holds the guilt of his parents death on his shoulders. He had brought the humans into the forest when his father died and it was because of his friendship with the human girl that his mother died. So Loki doesn’t think very highly of himself.

Biography:

Loki was born in a large forest in the East. The east is mainly made up of forests because there is little human civilization there, no one is quite sure why but his parents were happy to raise their son there. His parents were free-lancer demons, both being moth demons, they enjoy the forests and the solitude. Free-lancer Most moth demons were peaceful so solitude was better for them, they enjoy not having to deal with the troubles of life and just relaxing in the green grass and staring at the clouds all day.

They raised Loki in that forest (The forest of many dreams) with no hatred towards humans or other demons. They saw nothing wrong with the human race, which had helped them out many years ago. Loki’s parents had been in a terrible forest fire and the village not far from them got them out and the rest of the animals out of the forest to save them. Loki’s parents were in great debt to them and then promised they would not pre-judge humans. And they wouldn’t hate demons because they are their kind, sometimes they had some grudges against war and blood loving Demons, but that was only because they found them disgusting.

Loki was a curious child at five he ventured off in the night and go to the village that sat on the edge of the forest. No would see him of course, because he made sure to say near the tree line rather then go wondering in, which would be a death wish. Knowing humans hatred for demons was only powered by their fear of something stronger then themselves. But of course the youngster was caught by his father and he was lectured on what was right around humans and what was wrong.

His parents told him that humans did fear demons, so going near them would only raise that fear. But normally little children that didn’t hear of the other demons destroying villages and eating people would be okay with seeing them once and a while but to be seen fully would only cause a panic and they would come into the forest and attack them.

Loki took this to heart knowing it was true and rarely went near the village again.

Raising their son to be on a neutral basis with demons and humans was hard. Many demons saw moth demons as no threat and would pick on them regularly, because the moth demon is a rare demon and use to have little defenses and are terribly weak against magic. But in the forest it was peaceful and kept them safe.

One dark rainy evening was the hardest though. A demon by the name of Nadil came to them and asked if they would join him and help him take over the demonic world. Loki’s parents sensed him and pushed Loki off into the trees so Nadil wouldn’t see him. They both knew that if Nadil saw him he would be able to talk the boy into going with him because children are naive so a child would agree but Adults knew better then to just join up with any demon. Nadil asked for their help to take over. Loki couldn’t understand why his parents were so worried about the demon seeing him. Of course Loki’s parents denied joining him and sent him away.

Loki saw nothing to fear from Nadil and thought his ideas were good. Why were they so afraid of him? And Loki learned the hardest lesson of all. That a moth demon’s natural curiosity was it’s downfall. ( note the saying “Like a Moth to a flame”)

As Loki grew his father began to teach him ‘powders’. These were a spell like creation that was in a powder form. They would enable him to put people to sleep, make two people in love, almost anything but kill someone. This would make him more powerful and help protect himself from other demons. But one of his father’s warnings was that the effects of the powders were the same on him and he has no immunities to them and someone could easily use them against him.

During one of Loki’s lessons they were attacked by a demon. The creature was a water demon and beautiful young woman at that. She pulled Loki into the water holding the young moth demon under to drown him because she could breath underwater.


Loki’s lungs screamed for air but he knew better then to inhale that would kill him. Struggling to get out he was suddenly set free as his father cut the woman’s arm off. The battle was small having Loki’s father the winner but Loki had passed out under the water. Loki’s father quickly brought him to the surface and began to perform an older version of CPR. Loki coughed up the water and shivered as he dad picked him up and carried him home. He use to enjoy the rain but now any thought of water bring back that memory so Loki tried his best to stay far from it. The only thing Loki likes about water is the sound of rain or the sound of waterfalls.

But as Loki’s free-time grew as he was coming to learning more then his own father he began to wonder near the village again. He decided to go into the village’s outskirts and as he very quietly walked along he heard a scream because she saw a mouse but he thought it was because she saw him. Knowing that the other villagers would come Loki attempted to run but as he turned the corner he ran into a young girl. She looked at him and blinked a few times. She didn’t do anything except sit there wide-mouthed.

For the first time Loki felt wanted around a human, Naomi. When he hit her she didn’t scream and when some people came running to find out why the other woman screamed Naomi hid Loki. Loki eventually found out that Naomi like how he looked and how different he was then from everyone else. So Naomi and Loki became friend behind his and her parent’s backs. But they were still young…they didn’t understand the dangers they were causing.

One day after Loki’s daily lesson he hopped off happy as a lark and went to go see Naomi. The young girl was crying and told him to leave her alone because she wasn’t allowed to see her anymore. Her parents had seen her with Loki and knew he was a demon. They didn’t trust demons (of course) and wanted their daughter safe and far away from Loki. Loki begged her to stay his friend and she agreed because she cared for Loki as a friend. Naomi really didn’t want to leave Loki, she cared for him deeply and he was one of her only friends. She needed him there or her life would be nothing but gardening. Which is what the children in her age group did for the village.

Eventually Naomi began ageing when Loki stayed young. Loki’s feelings for Naomi had changed greatly and he walked to stay with her but he was 11(in moth years 20 technically in human years but he still looks eleven) when she was 17. He hated this, his love for Naomi was true and he wanted her to love him back but that was impossible. Mainly because a demon and human relationship was so horrible you could be killed for it. Loki didn’t understand why people would do that, if someone is in love they should be able to love who they want to.



It was four weeks before Naomi’s 18th birthday she met her fiancée. Loki spied on them because she had told him she couldn’t play that day. Loki hated the man, although he seemed okay for human standers, Loki knew that man would never protect her.

On Naomi’s birthday she was married and they had a grand festival. Naomi invited Loki. At first Loki wasn't sure if he wanted to go, he had never really talked with the other humans except for Naomi and he wasn't sure how they would act. Naomi said that everything was going to be fine and all he needed to do was disguise himself so no one could tell he was a demon.

At the party there was dancing and a great feast. Loki had disguised himself with a wrap around his head, and Naomi’s paint to hide his markings. The party began at sun set and there was music and dancing. Loki watched Naomi and her husband dance and he was happy for her. Loki rather not danced because he never was taught how. But a young boy came up to him, mistaking him for a girl and dragged Loki to the dance floor. Loki tried to get away but it was no use. The boy spun Loki around and the wrap came off and he hit the table with such a force the wooden bowl of punch fell over on his head and the paint washed away.

Now his demonic looks were shown to everyone, they freaked and Naomi’s mother demanded him to be killed. Naomi tried to protect the boy with no prevail and told him to run.

Loki ran as fast as he could and met up with his parents and he told them what happened. His parents were very disappointed in Loki and tried to tell him what he did was wrong but they heard movement in the forest and began to try to escape. But before they could escape hunters ran into the woods and began to hunt down Loki and his parents. Running away they tried to get out and Loki’s father distracted the hunters while Loki’s mother took him and flew off. And as they flew the humans launched arrows at them. An arrow tore through Loki’s wing and his mother had to carry him. Loki knew from that moment he would never trust human’s again. They were backstabbers and their hated towards demons was stupid, because some demons weren’t evil.

As his mother and Loki got away, Loki wished he could take everything that had just happened back but he couldn’t and was stuck having to deal with what he had caused. But like a lot of people Loki blamed someone else for this problem. He blamed the humans, and that took the ease off his shoulders.

When Loki and his mother settled down again in another forest she taught him swordsman ship. She told him only to use it to protect and never to kill though. Loki followed his mother’s rules and learned as much as he could. It was difficult without his father around, his mother tried to fight back the tears of her loss many times as the subject was brought up. Loki was only on his third lesson which was telepathy. His mother was on one of the last lessons which was that if his feelers were cut off his would have to grow them back before he could use telepathy again because their feelers are their main source for telepathy. (sorry if that is a bit hard to understand it is kinda hard to explain) It was in the middle of the night after that lesson when they were caught by humans. The humans had heard from the other village that their were moth demons running around killing people, and that they might be in the forests around their village. Oh course not wanting anyone to be killed the human’s hired Demons Hunters to track them down. The humans had come in the middle of the night and took Loki and his mother from their sleeping trance and caged them taking them to their village.


The villagers set up a wooden pole and sticks around it, they had heard that demons were attack another village and assumed these were the demons. They were going to burn Loki and his mother alive and the mother went first to that Loki could grieve while watching him mother.

Caged Loki was forced to watch the human’s burn his mother. He hated it. Her cries rang in his ears as tears flowed form his pink eyes, why were they doing this to him? Loki’s sadness turned to rage and as they opened the cage door he got out and began to attack the humans with the little knowledge of swordsman ship he had. Killing off two or three they ganged up on him and began beating the child to death. Loki scream out in pain as a sword entered his shoulder and began burring itself deeper through his shoulder. He opened his eyes tried to hold back the pain when a black light engulfed the humans around him and they burst into a black flame and then turned to ash. Nadil and his team walked over to Loki and pulled the sword from his shoulder and helped him up. Nadil noticed his mother’s skeleton on the pole and then asked Loki if he would join his team. Loki agreed telling Nadil that he owed him his life.

From that day forward Loki put all his trust into Nadil because he had saved his life. At 101 years old, after training himself with his powders and swordsman ship he had almost completely forgotten what his mother had told him, and his hatred towards humans had grown so much he enjoyed killing them. Loki and four other demons were sent on a mission and burned down a village and killed all the people in it. Loki watched the people scream as they burned and the precious memories of his mother came back to him. Loki then began to avoid killing people because of his mother’s wishes. The guilt of the death of so many began to bog him down and he felt horrible. Loki isn’t proud of anything he as done after his mother’s death but he has now no choice, Nadil was making his move and Loki had to help.




Okay I added a bit more, sorry if you don't understand the Feelers thing it is kinda like the powere source for the telepathy >.<

#8 DarkJuno

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 04:57 PM

Sorry it took so long - I moved three weeks ago, was in Mexico for a week the next week, and spent all of last week catching up and unpacking - the latter of which is still not complete.

Anyway, much, much better. Still some kinks, but approved. :prime:




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