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#1 Ransom

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Posted 08 June 2009 - 02:49 PM

Name: Prince Longinus Quin’Tynosthenes (Lon-ji-nus quin-tie-noss-thee-nees)

Original: Yes

Origin: n/a

For Dragon Lords.


Race/Nationality: Human (with Royal Blood), Quinian.

Age: 20

Height: 6’2”

Weight: about 76 Kgs

Build: Tall, Lithe.

Hair: Straight and thick, coloured a very dark but rich red, an ancient trait of the Tynosthenes line.

Eyes: A deep blue, often mistaken for those of someone innocent and honest.

Typical Attire: Longinus is the only true son of the existing Royal family of Quin. (he has many half-brothers and sisters) Being heir to the throne, the prince of Quin dons only royal and extravagant attire. His dress, (when not in disguise) is a combination of fashionable, sharp and elegant, and almost always fiercely compliments his shape and dominant personality.
When participating in a battle or war, Longinus will wear high-ranking Quin battle armour that protects him from most long range gunfire.
When in disguise, Longinus employs well fitting travelling clothes and a cloak. He will often wear a cowl in these times to avoid being recognised, or standing out of the crowd. Fashionable items such as flight goggles and aiming eye glasses are also among his travelling equipment.

Facial Appearance and other distinguishing features: Most people would call Longinus “handsome”, or even “beautiful”, just by seeing him from afar. It’s when you get close, however, that you really see the truth in these statements. Longinus’ face is smooth and proportioned, with a well shaped jaw-line and balanced features. His youthful appearance is accurate to his age but a very deceiving judge of his emotional and mental capacity.

Weapon: Longinus almost carries the Quinian Royal Blade at his side, a symbol of his status. A finely crafted sabre, it was made by the Dwarves centuries ago for the royal family, and has been passed down the Tynosthenian line ever since.
Being royalty, he also has access to a variety of finely crafted guns, the type of firearm he uses depending on the situation.


Religion: With Quin having no official religion, Longinus was raised with no guidance in this area. Familiar with the histories of the religions of Panak, Longinus has a peculiar belief in the existence of all the major religions and their deities, thinking that they all serve under one power; a power which he seeks to identify someday.

Strengths: Longinus’ dominant and most obvious strength is his influence and brilliant political mind. His father, King Archias, once said, “Longinus could charm a Dragon Knight into eating his own heart.” Though this may be an exaggeration, it is not far off the truth.
A master of public oration and rhetoric, Longinus’s persuasive abilities are almost flawless, which is only enhanced by his charming manner and stunning good looks. An extremely strong mental will is the basis of this, and gives the Prince an incredible aptitude for speechcraft and the art of politics.
Whether he wants to charm them, intimidate them, sleep with them or just use them, Longinus has a certain power over almost anyone he meets that is weaker mentally than he is. (which is almost everyone.)
Longinus, though he doesn’t know it, has certain abilities in Psichoran magic which only strengthens this natural talent in influencing others.
Longinus, growing up in a rich family, has had the privilege of being trained in marksmanship for most of his life, and has moderate abilities thereof, especially with a long range rifle.
His skinny, lithe frame also gives him speed in battle to avoid attacks or to retreat.
High intelligence and strategic ability come naturally to Longinus, his heavy schooling in the arts, culture and history of Panak (and especially Quin) only aiding this. He is well spoken, observant and always has control of himself and his emotions. Reading others desires and weaknesses come naturally to him, and he is extremely adept at determining how a person thinks or feels in a short period of time.
Greatly familiar with culture and the arts, he is also very talented musically, and is an accomplished tenor, and piper.
Longinus is also a master in the art of love, having had much practice in pleasuring the many beautiful ladies (both young and old) of the Quinian court.


Weaknesses: Longinus, is in a word, weak. Being trained in fencing and hand to hand combat as he was growing up did nothing really to improve this, as his heart was never really in it. His lithe body is not conducive to taking any major amount of damage, and growing up in a palace where he was bathed and well fed did nothing to improve this. This weak constitution makes him easy to capture, and even easier to kill, a fact that makes him constantly alert.
Though he carries a sabre, he is an extremely average fencer, and only uses it as a symbol of his status as the crown prince of Quin. He is rather unfit and could be easily outrun (long distance) by any common farm girl.
Though he is very good at hiding it, Longinus becomes very anxious at the prospect of fighting anyone close range. In this way, he is a coward, and will always revert to dirty tactics where he can in such a fight.
Longinus easily becomes sick, and has allergic reactions to a moderate amount of the flora and fauna of Panak. He has a horrible stomach for alcohol and will almost always end up extremely drunk after just a few drinks.
Extremely arrogant, Longinus will often gravely underestimate his enemies’ intelligence, a fact which will usually come back to bite him.
This being said, Longinus has great potential to being a master user in Psichoran, but is prevented by his great hatred of magic, thinking it a travesty of the natural order used by primitive folk. This combined with his arrogant denial of ever using it himself, inhibit some of the Prince’s latent abilities in magic from developing any further.
Also, because of his unintentional use of Psichoran, Longinus often leaves his own mind completely open and vulnerable to mental attacks by other magic users.



Bio:
To know the history of crown prince Longinus Quin’Tynosthenes, you also must have a basic understanding of the history of Quin, and its royal line.

A history Schpiel:
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Quin is actually one of the oldest nations on Panak, predating even the Kinaani Empire. Once among the great First Lands from the days of old, Quin, (or Quintarfin as it was called in legend) was established along with an unknown number of other nations by the great Powers of ancient Panak.
Along with this great building of nations was the appointing of special leaders to rule them. These leaders or “Kings” as they came to be called, we’re granted a special Gift by the Powers, originating down to their physical blood. The effects of the Gift on a specific level was unknown, and remains so. But overall the Kings seemed to gain a new strength in it, a hungering fire in their souls which could not be quelled, giving them the unstoppable will of gods. The citizens of the First Lands followed them willingly and with all their hearts, enthralled by these new and powerful figures of greatness, and inspired by their strength.
The gift, of course, was passed down from generation to generation, coming to be known as “Royal Blood” or just “the King’s Blood”. With the blood, came that overwhelming will to power, from father to son, mother to daughter, from king to greater king.
Under these powerful Royal lines, Quintarfin and the other First Lands prospered and thrived, it was a true golden age.
But as the millennia passed, the twilight of the golden age finally came to a close, and the lands of Panak were changed. New gods arose and old ones perished, giving rise to a new order. The Forests died and new ones grew, and the seas and mountains themselves we’re shifted.
But it was not the end for many of the more hearty races, including mankind, and they survived. For the most part, new countries and nations were established, but an echo of the great Quintarfin, the land of Quin, remained. And surviving with it, by some miracle, was the royal bloodline.
For Millenia, Quin endured the test of time, continuing as best it could its ancient traditions of culture and philosophy, and of course, its royal customs. With the Onset of the Kinaani Empire, the royal family of Quin bent under the military pressure and surrendered the Fenti plains to Emperor Kilanad, eventually becoming a high-ranking royal family in the Empire of Kinaan.
When the Kinaani Empire finally crumbled, the true people of Quin seized their chance for independence, and took back the Fenti plains, ruling from their capitol, Qi. This was short lived however and through many conflicts spanning a century, the nation of Quin was reduced to the tiny territory it is now, the smallest nation in Panak.
Land was scarce, but national pride was not, and the stubborn Quinians to this day fiercely retain what they have left of their rich culture and royal customs. The bloodline remains in the royal family, and the royal family remain in power, a testament to the strength of the Gift of the King’s Blood.


It was into this world of relative peace that Longinus was born. King Archias Quin’Tynosthenes finally took a Queen in his old age, and a shortly after, an heir was born. Longinus, supposedly named after the first King of Quintarfin, was not born without a cost.
After the rigours of childbirth, the fragile body of Queen Tyrsii was racked and broken, reducing her to a vegetable for the remainder of her days.
The King, greatly affected by this, was never the same. Though the people still loved him, he grew odder and odder, and began to give out insane declarations of war and execution. His closest advisors began to quietly rule the kingdom in his stead, ignoring his commands, but ensuring him that they were carried out. To the people, all was well.
The young Prince was the fresh new hope for the kingdom, and the advisors raised him accordingly, educating him, and filling him with the knowledge that comes with power. The Royal Blood flowed strongly in Longinus, and all around him could tell something was different, even as a child.
When he was 18, and already exhibiting his political brilliance, the advisors secretly gave him rule of the kingdom after he convinced them he was ready.
Longinus ruled secretly for two years, but made himself well known as the beloved Prince of Quin. The people loved him, and couldn’t be more thrilled about his coming succession. But law was law, and he could not become King until Archias was dead.
But Longinus had secret desires; desires that no one but him knew or would ever know; desires for power.
Longinus knew he could rule Panak. He could unite this land of petty conflicts and small wars, and it became his only and overarching goal. His right to the throne of Quin was only a stepping stone to this ultimate goal, and he would use it. Every ounce of it.
As he ruled Quin, he began to hatch plans… millions of plans.
In his secret room in the palace, he would spend days at a time making giant charts and graphs of plans. He made thousands of them, and when he made one that he thought would work, he would commit it to memory, and burn it. No one must know.
Between all this, he played the part of Crown Prince: enjoying himself where he could, going to balls, seducing women and winning the love of the people.

How He Became Lord of Drojok Schpiel:
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It was on his 20th birthday that Prince Longinus put his first plan into action. It involved Kilord, a division of Quin and her neighbouring nation. Kilord was one of the strongest military nations of the Fenti plains, and because of its strong alliance with the metal-rich (especially gold) nation of Drojok, (just next door) was able to afford countless mercenary power on top of its existing military.
Weeks before the day of the plan, the royal spy network of Quin informed Longinus that the Lord of Drojok, the merchant Fin-Baltar, would be visiting Kilord for their annual trade festivities.
The Prince saw his chance, and formulated a plan that would not endanger Quin whatsoever, but would finally gain it the influence it deserved.
The first stage was the construction of a flyer by the Royal aviation engineer. It was designed to look exactly like a Flyer’s Guild messenger flyer, only having the capacity for one passenger. The plan involved flying a fake message of panic into Drojok’s capitol, Dirik, claiming that Fin-Baltar had been assassinated by the Kilordans.
So on his 20th birthday Longinus sent his fake messenger into Dirik, and the nation was thrown into a state of panic. As predicted, Drojok’s second in command acted before even considering the validity of the message, and declared war on Kilord. Kilord, shocked and outraged, imprisoned Baltar, and in traditional Kilord fashion, tortured him incessantly. By the time Drojok’s forces reached Sed, (capitol of Kilord) they found their Lord not dead, but imprisoned and tortured, an act even more enraging to them, and they renewed their attacks. Kilord, predictably, held them off, and with their superior military might, planned a counter attack.
Just a month after his plan was initiated, Prince Longinus received a message (two weeks earlier than expected) from Kilord, requesting military help and the honouring of the old debt. (Kilord aided Quin in a battle a century before)
Longinus sent back a message (as the king) that Quin agreed, but had a plan that did not involve military involvement, and would be sending Prince Longinus as a war delegate. Just a day later, a delegate also arrived from Drojok, requesting military aid from Quin.
The Prince had also expected this, and sent a message saying they would carry out an independent assault from the north on Kilord and in the confusion attempt to recover Fin-Baltar. If Quin succeeded, Drojok had a war debt to them from then on. The delegate was more than pleased with the arrangement and took the message back to Dirik.

Longinus travelled to Sed, and from there outlined his plan to the nobles of Kilord.
They would poison Fin-Baltar with a slow poison, and then Longinus himself, as promised, would deliver him back to Drojok, under the assumption that Quin had invaded Kilord to do so. Because Drojok had dropped back to regroup from their attacks on Kilord, they would not know that it never happened. Through this, Quin would gain power over Drojok, and renew the alliance.
Kilord agreed to Longinus’ proposal and the plan was carried out.

Once in Dirik, (Drojok’s capitol) Longinus returned with Baltar and was hailed a hero. Because of the poison, Fin-Baltar was insufferably sick, and Longinus began to to give the impression of an exclusive connection and deep bond between the now “sick” and abused Lord of Drojok, and his valiant hero, Prince of Quin.
Staying by his side at all times, as if he was the only real carer of Baltar, Longinus stayed in Dirik for weeks, while their lord slowly died. Soon Longinus was the only one admitted to Lord Baltar’s chambers during his sickness, and began to be seen as the Merchant Lord’s right hand man, and confidant. He spoke for him, delivering Baltar’s orders and speeches to the people.
As Baltar’s new “mouth”, and chief advisor by proxy during his time of sickness, Longinus slowly began to ease his way into governance of Drojok. More and more the people of Drojok began to love this noble young hero who spoke for their beloved Lord. Soon enough, cries of “Long live Longinus” were mingled along with “Long live Drojok!” and “Up Baltar!” in the street.
Finally, as planned, Baltar died, and having no children, Longinus was unanimously named his successor. Again, he had won the heart of a people.
Now in control of Drojok, Longinus fulfilled his end of the bargain with Kilord and once again forged the gold/mercenary alliance. Now ruler of two nations, and a great influence over another, Prince Longinus could finally begin his plans.


So now Lord of Drojok, and heir to the Quinian throne, Prince Longinus travels to the imperial city. What new adventures await him there? What will he learn? Who will he meet along the way? What other cheesy catchphrases have I missed?







Note: Spoiler tags have been added for the general reader's convenience in skipping over some rather descriptive passages. I encourage you to to still read them if you want the full understanding of this character.

Edited by Ransom, 14 July 2009 - 05:55 AM.


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Posted 09 June 2009 - 09:24 PM

Ever so slightly lopsided in the strength there - if he can talk himself out of a fight, being crappy physically hardly matters. Not a big deal, just adjust it so he's not such a fanfic Jedi and you're good to go.

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Posted 10 June 2009 - 01:56 AM

changes in italics.




Name: Prince Longinus Quin’Tynosthenes (Lon-ji-nus quin-tie-noss-thee-nees)

Original: Yes

Origin: n/a

For Dragon Lords.


Race/Nationality: Human (with Royal Blood), Quinian.

Age: 20

Height: 6’2”

Weight: about 76 Kgs

Build: Tall, Lithe.

Hair: Straight and thick, coloured a very dark but rich red, an ancient trait of the Tynosthenes line.

Eyes: A deep blue, often mistaken for those of someone innocent and honest.

Typical Attire: Longinus is the only true son of the existing Royal family of Quin. (no counting his many half-brothers and sisters) Being heir to the throne, the crown prince of Quin dons only royal and extravagant attire. His dress, (when not in disguise) is a combination of fashionable, sharp and elegant, and almost always fiercely compliments his shape and dominant personality.
When participating in a battle or war, Longinus will wear the high-ranking Quin battle armour of a Quinian Strategos that protects him from most long range gunfire.
When in disguise, Longinus employs well fitting travelling clothes and a cloak. He will often wear a cowl in these times to avoid being recognised, or standing out of the crowd.

Facial Appearance and other distinguishing features: Most people would call Longinus “handsome”, or even “beautiful”, just by seeing him from afar. It’s when you get close, however, that you really see the truth in these statements. Longinus’ face is smooth and proportioned, with a well shaped jaw-line and balanced features. His youthful appearance is accurate to his age but a very deceiving judge of his emotional and mental capacity.

Weapon: Longinus almost carries the Quinian Royal Blade at his side, a symbol of his status. A finely crafted sabre, it was made by the Dwarves centuries ago for the royal family, and has been passed down the Tynosthenian line ever since.
Being royalty, he also has access to a variety of finely crafted guns, the type of firearm he uses depending on the situation.


Religion: With Quin having no official religion, Longinus was raised with no guidance in this area. Familiar with the histories of the religions of Panak, Longinus has a peculiar belief in the existence of all the major religions and their deities, thinking that they all serve under one power; a power which he seeks to identify someday.

Strengths: Longinus’ dominant and most obvious strength is his influence and brilliant political mind. His father, King Archias, once said, “Longinus could charm a Dragon Knight into eating his own heart.” Though this may be an exaggeration, it is not far off the truth.
A master of public oration and rhetoric, Longinus’s persuasive abilities are almost flawless, which is only enhanced by his charming manner and stunning good looks. An extremely strong mental will is the basis of this, and gives the Prince an incredible aptitude for speechcraft and the art of politics.
Whether he wants to charm them, intimidate them, sleep with them or just use them, Longinus has a certain power over almost everyone, the amount of that power being inversely proportional to the strength of their mind.
Longinus, though he doesn’t know it, has certain abilities in Psichoran magic which only strengthens this natural talent in influencing others.
Longinus, growing up in a rich family, has had the privilege of being trained in marksmanship for most of his life, and has moderate abilities thereof, especially with a long range rifle.
His skinny, lithe frame also gives him speed in battle to avoid attacks or to retreat.
High intelligence and strategic ability come naturally to Longinus, his heavy schooling in the arts, culture and history of Panak (and especially Quin) only aiding this. He is well spoken, observant and always has control of himself and his emotions. Reading others desires and weaknesses come naturally to him, and he is extremely adept at determining how a person thinks or feels in a short period of time.
Greatly familiar with culture and the arts, he is also very talented musically, and is an accomplished tenor, and piper.
Longinus is also a master in the art of love, having had much practice in pleasuring the many beautiful ladies (both young and old) of the Quinian court.


Weaknesses: Longinus, is in a word, weak. Being trained in fencing and hand to hand combat as he was growing up did nothing really to improve this, as his heart was never really in it. His lithe body is not conducive to taking any major amount of damage, and growing up in a palace where he was bathed and well fed did nothing to improve this. This weak constitution makes him easy to capture, and even easier to kill, a fact that makes him constantly alert.
Though he carries a sabre, he is an extremely average fencer, and only uses it as a symbol of his status as the crown prince of Quin. He is rather unfit and could be easily outrun (long distance) by any common farm girl.
Though he is very good at hiding it, Longinus becomes very anxious at the prospect of fighting anyone close range. In this way, he is a coward, and will always revert to dirty tactics where he can in such a fight. However because of his anxiety attacks, Longinus will completely lose his composure if forced to fight, which completely negates his persuasive abilities.
Longinus easily becomes sick, and has allergic reactions to a moderate amount of the flora and fauna of Panak. He has a horrible stomach for alcohol and will almost always end up extremely drunk after just a few drinks.
Extremely arrogant, Longinus will often gravely underestimate his enemies’ intelligence, a fact which will usually come back to bite him.
This being said, Longinus has great potential to being a master user in Psichoran, but is prevented by his great hatred of magic, thinking it a travesty of the natural order used by primitive folk. This combined with his arrogant denial of ever using it himself, inhibit some of the Prince’s latent abilities in magic from developing any further.
Also, because of his unintentional use of Psichoran, Longinus often leaves his own mind completely open and vulnerable to mental attacks by other magic users.



Howzat?

Edited by Ransom, 10 June 2009 - 01:57 AM.


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Posted 16 June 2009 - 10:10 PM

All right, why not.

Good to go.




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