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#1 roflolmao

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Posted 04 June 2009 - 04:05 AM

Full name: Elenium Foxx, friends call him Lenn or Fox, between elves he is known as the Grey Fox, Windronyo
Date & Place of birth: Unknown
Physical description: 183cm, 70kg, dark hair, blue-green eyes.
Race: Human (Mutated)
Education: Witcher :D
Occupation: Witcher, a proffesional monster hunter.
Job-related skills: High reflex speed, adjustable pupil size (for adjusting to different light conditions)
Sense of humour: Sexual or "The smart kind"
Distinguishing marks: Countless scars. EVERYWHERE.
Sexual orientation: Straight.

Equipment: 25 inches.... JUST KIDDING. As a witcher he is always carrying two great swords on his back: A silver one (For most monsters) and a steel, meteorite ore one (For some monsters and people). Also, he always has his magic witcher medallion on him.



Strengths and weaknesses

As a witcher Lenn has a very high reflex speed as well as adjustable pupil size. He has very high physical strength.
He cannot take many potions as each potion toxicates him, and when on high toxicity level he functions worse. He is also very weak against magic.


Moves and abilities:

Draw sword - Yes, this is actually a move, a witcher can draw his sword out so fast you won't notice exactly when did it get to your neck.

Magic sign - All witchers are taught a few magic signs to be used in time of need:
The Aard Posted Image - The Aard Sign is comprised of a telekinetic thrust which resembles a gust of wind that repels and knocks down opponents. It is ideal for combating foes who surround Foxx, but can also be used to destroy barriers and perform other physically arduous tasks.
The Igni Posted Image - Once the Igni Sign has been charged, this pyrokinetic wave can be used to incinerate foes. In its basic form it is an effective weapon against opponents susceptible to flames and can also be used as a substitute for flint to ignite campfires.
The Quen Posted Image - The Quen Sign forms a protective field that surrounds Lenn, rendering him temporarily untouchable. In combat, it facilitates potion consumption and non-combat actions by protecting Elenium from his opponents’ blows. Any offensive action terminates the Sign’s effects.
The Axii Posted Image - The Axii Sign is comprised of a psychic wave that gives the user influence over others. It can be used to charm, briefly stun, or instill panic and fear in foes. When greatly charged, it can enchant opponents so effectively as to render them Foxx's temporary allies.
The Yrden Posted Image - A magic trap cast on the ground or floor, the Yrden Sign produces various effects in foes, including Pain, Blinding, Poisoning, and the like. It can be enhanced to cause an increased number of effects simultaneously in a single target or to have a greater effective range against multiple targets.

Alchemy - Having the right ingredients Elenium can brew potions.

Drink potion - Elenium usually has some witcher potions potions on him just in case. He can also prepare some.
Blizzard Posted Image - Blizzard is one of the most powerful witchers' potions; it improves reflexes and reaction time, allowing a witcher to better parry and evade attacks.
Cat Posted Image - This potion grants vision in total darkness.
Swallow Posted Image - Swallow is a healing potion.
White Gull Posted Image - White Gull is a hallucinogenic beverage, but it can also be used to create other potions; it serves as a base for complex potions.
White Honey Posted Image - White Honey strongly stimulates the production of purifying enzymes in witchers' mutated bodies. Thus, it frees their bodies of the effects of toxicity, though it simultaneously nullifies the beneficial effects of any potions previously consumed. White Honey does not alleviate the effects of common venoms and poisons.

Witcher Medallion Posted Image - The witcher medallion vibrates on Foxx's chest when sensing powerful magic or monsters nearby.



Bio

Long ago an anonymous witcher hardly important enough to be remembered by name saved an old mans life. In exchange he asked for the usual deal - the man would give him whatever he later found at home without expecting it. Upon return home the man found his wife giving birth, and he named the baby Elenium. Lenn was taken to Kaer Morhen for witcher training where he spent years going through the numerous test. Out of 9 boys 3 survived the Mutagenic herbs test. Upon leaving every Witcher in training had to pick a last name, as having a full name makes people trust you. Lenn took his nickname, Fox, which he got for hanging around the numerous foxes around Kaer Morhen more than around his "classmates". After getting his two swords he set of into the world.

After leaving Kaer Morhen he set out in search of work. His first job was cleaning an abandoned house of Ghouls which set off every night to find anyone stupid enough to be outside their house and have a snack. Having this job done he continued his journey. While walking around Redania he stumbled upon an old friend, Sialelm Unttas, one of his former "classmates", with whom he up took a mission of destroying a giant Manticore residing in the Kestre Mountains, descending to the cities around once in a while to feed. After splitting the reward equally they split ways into unknown directions.

Edited by roflolmao, 05 June 2009 - 12:02 AM.


#2 Steel Samurai

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Posted 04 June 2009 - 04:19 AM

Interesting. I hadn't actually ever expected to have a Wiedzmin character. Good start, but there's just a coooouuuuple things to work on.

Fiiiirst of all, you need a strengths and weaknesses section. Witchers are pretty ridiculously powerful, I know, but you need to make it as balanced as possible.

Secondly, (and more importantly) give him some personality! As 'tis, besides his name and the fact his hair is dark, he might as well be Geralt! Flesh out the biography a bit. I want to know what sorts of things he's done since becoming a witcher, what sets him apart from other witchers, whether he has any friends or lovers. How does he deal with being a mutant, not quite human but not quite monster either? Do that, and you'll be well on your way to getting this bad boy approved. Oh, and if you could put the changes in italics it would help me out a loooot. :D

Just out of curiosity, did you have an RPG in mind for him?

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Posted 04 June 2009 - 05:07 AM

Okay, Ill do the changes requested. But I didnt quite understand the question, can you please explain what dya mean?

PS The Witcher books are VERY interesting. Reading them in Russian... its a 7 or 8 series, cant remember, and im somewhere on book 5 or 6.

Edited by roflolmao, 04 June 2009 - 05:09 AM.


#4 Steel Samurai

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Posted 04 June 2009 - 06:09 AM

I think I've only read the one that was translated. And watched the TV series. And played the game.

I mean like, what do you want to do with this character once you get him approved?

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Posted 04 June 2009 - 07:15 AM

RP, what, are there other options?

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Posted 04 June 2009 - 07:19 AM

None whatsoever :P

But you've got to have a game to RP him in, and the only two active ones at the moment are Dragon Lords and The War of Politics. Unless you were going to try to resurrect LAville uni.

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Posted 04 June 2009 - 07:41 AM

LOL okay, I editted him. Go on, read! :P

Edited by roflolmao, 05 June 2009 - 12:31 AM.


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Posted 06 June 2009 - 09:31 AM

Ok, strengths and weaknesses are acceptable. But the bio still needs some work. I still wanna know a bit more about him, how he operates, what makes him different from all the other witchers. What are his ambitions, if any?

I think it would be helpful for you to add a personality section. Describe his personality, and then use that to go into the bio and make things a bit deeper. If you get those things done, then you'll probably be ready for appprrooooovall.

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Posted 06 June 2009 - 09:35 AM

Copy that.

Out of curiosity, whats with the... umm... "coooouuuuple", "Fiiiirst", "appprrooooovall"???

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Posted 06 June 2009 - 12:05 PM

*cough* I'm trying to be Nice.


You wouldn't like me when I'm not nice.

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Posted 06 June 2009 - 02:02 PM

I see. Yes, prolonging words to make them clear IS one way to sound nicer. Good job! :D No sarcasm.




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