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[Yzzi]

Name:Paul Norris


Original: yes, made for LAville Uiniversity

Strengths:Paul has the ability to transform metal from a liquid to a solid state and back almost instantly. Paul also has extreme knowledge of mechanics and is not harmed by heated metal and is well liked


Weaknesses: Paul can't manipulate metal if he is not in conntact with it, He can't usually sustain a liquid form for more than five minutes at a time as well. he also cant manipulate metal that is under water and he has a fear of loss





Name:Paul Norris

Address & Phone Number:127 Buncombe Drive/ (729)-852-4556 (this is not anything close to my real address or phone number)

Date & Place of Birth:January 1/ LAville

Height/Weight/Physical Description:6'0"/150 lbs/ Slender

Citizenship/Ethnic Origin:Paul is an LAville Citizen

Parents' Names & Occupations:Phillip Norris and Susan Norris both retired

Other Family Members:None

Spouse or Lover:Samantha "sam" Smith/Norris

Friends' Names & Occupations:None

Education:High school

Occupation/Employer:Mechanic/ Jame Swanson

Social Class:Deisel Mechanics and engineering

Salary:$10.50 an hour

Community Status:None

Job-Related Skills:Mechanics

Political Beliefs/Affiliations:None

Hobbies/Recreations:Motorcycle riding and building

Personal Qualities (imagination, taste, etc.):Paul has a good imagination and is very creative

Ambitions:Paul wants to start his own garage

Fears / Anxieties / Hang-ups:Paul is afraid of losing relationships

Intelligence:Paul has a 4.0

Sense of Humor:Paul loves to make puns

Most Painful Setback/Disappointment:Break ups

Most Instructive/Meaningful Experience:His first mechanics instructor

Health / Physical Condition / Distinguishing Marks / Disabilities:Paul has a scar Going all the way up his left arm from a peice of debri in an accident

Sexual Orientation / Experience/Values:Straight/Little/Morals

Tastes in food, drink, art, music, literature, decor, clothing:Mexican food/coke/None/hard rock/isaac asimov/none/tight shirts and loose pants.

Attitude toward Life:Might as well make the best of it

Attitude toward Death:Death will happen when it happens so hope it doesn't happen today

Philosophy of Life (in a phrase):Live life with no regrets a bit cliche I know


Bio: Paul Norris was born in 1988 on January 1 to Phillip Norris a fluential engineer and Susan Norris his wife at the age of ten Paul fell into molten metal mixed with acid giving him the ability to transform metal from its liquid state to its solid state instantly

At the age of 14 he met Samantha Smith (born in 1989 on Febuary 2 to James and Leane Smith) at the age of sixteen he took up mechanics and decided he wanted to become a diesel mechanic

On August 14 2007 Paul Norris Married Samantha Smith, just in time to start college


Hope that does it

Edited by Yzzi, 31 March 2008 - 08:15 PM.

[Steel Samurai]

Okie dokie, this is looking like it will turn out to be an interesting character. First of all though, we need to know a bit more about Paul. His history, how he got his powers, an' such. If you want to, you can just go here and fill out the survey Laz has so kindly created. We're also gonna want a leeeeettle bit more detail on the strengths and weaknesses. Get those two things done and we'll be looking a lot better. LAville needs all the help it can get.

[Yzzi]

Okie dokie, this is looking like it will turn out to be an interesting character. First of all though, we need to know a bit more about Paul. His history, how he got his powers, an' such. If you want to, you can just go here and fill out the survey Laz has so kindly created. We're also gonna want a leeeeettle bit more detail on the strengths and weaknesses. Get those two things done and we'll be looking a lot better. LAville needs all the help it can get.

does that work

[Steel Samurai]

Good. Now, just put that information into a paragraph form and he'll be right to go. Basically, take the information you've put in the questionnaire, and turn it into Paul's life story. For example, assuming I had a character named John Smith:
John smith was born in 1982 to Jack Smith, a carpenter who owned his own business, and Jenna Smith, his wife. When he was very small, he fell into a vat of burning wood shavings which just happened to have uranium embedded in them, and John gained the ability to turn himself into a pile of wood shavings whenever he wanted. John is about 5'2", and likes gambling and archery . . . etc. etc. Hopefully you get the idea. Once you get that done satisfactorily, he'll be all set.

[Yzzi]

Good. Now, just put that information into a paragraph form and he'll be right to go. Basically, take the information you've put in the questionnaire, and turn it into Paul's life story. For example, assuming I had a character named John Smith:
John smith was born in 1982 to Jack Smith, a carpenter who owned his own business, and Jenna Smith, his wife. When he was very small, he fell into a vat of burning wood shavings which just happened to have uranium embedded in them, and John gained the ability to turn himself into a pile of wood shavings whenever he wanted. John is about 5'2", and likes gambling and archery . . . etc. etc. Hopefully you get the idea. Once you get that done satisfactorily, he'll be all set.

done

[Nevermind]

Assume that we know nothing at all about your character. In a paragraph or more, I want you to tell me, who is Paul Norris? Imagine you were to write a book about Paul's life, and you want us to know the synopsis of said book, what would you tell us? It's detail we're looking for; we really want to know all that you currently know about Paul.

So, this time, see if you can't take just a tad more time, grab all of that useful information that you put into the resume, and form a couple of paragraphs out of it. There's enough there for you to make a substantial biography explaining to us who Paul really is. That would be perfect.

[Yzzi]

Assume that we know nothing at all about your character. In a paragraph or more, I want you to tell me, who is Paul Norris? Imagine you were to write a book about Paul's life, and you want us to know the synopsis of said book, what would you tell us? It's detail we're looking for; we really want to know all that you currently know about Paul.

So, this time, see if you can't take just a tad more time, grab all of that useful information that you put into the resume, and form a couple of paragraphs out of it. There's enough there for you to make a substantial biography explaining to us who Paul really is. That would be perfect.

Paul Norris by Yzzi

Paul Norris born January first nineteen eighty-eight is eighteen six feet tall one hundred and fifty pounds enjoys riding his motorcycle
and listening to hard rock music preferably not dirty he also enjoys Mexican food and working on engines he has recently started attending LAville University with his wife Samantha Smith Norris.
At the age of ten Paul accidentally fell into a boiling vat of metal mixed with acid and thus gained the ability to transform metal from a liquid to a solid state instantly which also gives him the ability to change the shape into anything he knows how.
At the age of fifteen Paul studied the inner workings of locks and guns so he could transform metal into locks and guns and bullets unfortunately he cant make bullets out of metal without gunpowder.
At the age of eighteen Paul bought his first motorcycle (see picture) a dodge tomahawk.
And later that year enrolled in his first college courses at LAville University thus starting his endless adventures of college

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[Nevermind]

Okay, I guess it passes. Approved.