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[Ganondorf]

Ya. She's my character from the former LA.

PART I

Name: Nalia
Race: elf
Age: 16
Height: 5’3
Weight: 110 lbs
Hair Color/Style: Redish brown hair. Reaches halfway down her back
Eye Color: A blue-gray colour. Above average vision.
Build: She is thin and athletic with delicate skin and features. She has the classic pointy ears and is very attractive.
B/W/H: B= moderately large W=thin H=slightly above average
Origin: Original.

PART II

Strengths & Abilities: -Very athletic and has above average dexterity by elf standards. She can run across walls etc. as in Prince of Persia
-lightning reflexes.
-She has amazing offensive capabilities and knows how to hit where it hurts. She fights very gracefully.
-Nalia can be very stealthy and creep up on enemies.

Weaknesses: -Her light build allows her to do things that others can’t (run on walls, dodge arrows etc.) but it also causes her to be rather frail and weak against impact from enemy weapons.
-gets tired rather quickly


PART III

Nalia is an orphaned elven child who has no idea who her parents are. She was left alone in a middle-eastern town similar to the ancient Egypt or Iraq of our world. Nalia was adopted by a man belonging to the local thief guild and raised as one of them. Her amazing reflexes, stealth and dexterity prompted the head of the guild to give her a job as an assassin. Nalia isn’t necessarily evil. She just does her job. She was trained to fight with many weapons. Those including: daggers, short swords, short bows, and long swords/rapiers.

Due to her elven nature she is fond of animals of all kinds and keeps a falcon as a pet. Nalia is lonely because her job requires her to have a low profile. Most people don’t even know that she exists. By the time someone sees her they die shortly after. Nalia is actually a nice person, though shy. She is very loyal.

When Nalia was 15 there was a revolt in the guild and the head was replaced by a man name Ali. He was far more evil and destructive than his predecessor. He wanted to replace all those who were still loyal to the former master. Nalia was one of them. She was an attractive elven girl and the young man tried to come onto her. That was a bad mistake. The event left a terrible scar that Ali wears to this day. He was convinced that he had to get rid of her too. He sent her on a mission to kill a prince from a neighboring country. Ali was sure that she’d fail and die. Nalia followed the orders reluctantly.

She arrived at the palace but it was well fortified. Nalia snuck into the palace through a crack in the wall and was making her way to the royal chambers when she was caught by the prince. She posed as a noble who came to visit the palace. Nalia fell for the man and couldn’t bring herself to kill him. The same for the prince who wished for her to stay. Ali grew angry when he heard news that Nalia wasn’t dead and neither was the Prince. He sent his most competent killers after the young elf. Nalia killed them with ease. She didn’t want the prince to get hurt so she fled the palace. Ali is still looking for her but little does he know that now Nalia is looking for him…

[Tri-Enforcer]

Very good so far...but why is this here in the storyline forums?

[Khallos]

Yes, I suggesr RPG charecter submissions, would be a better place to put this.