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[JRPomazon]

I'll try and make this brief.





PART 1:

Name: Majin Buu (Super Buu)

Race: Unknown

Age: N/A (doesn’t age)

Height: 7' 0

Weight: 150 lbs.

Hair Color: N/A (no hair)

Eye Color: Red (with black where the white would be)

Build: Muscular upper and lower body.

Origin: Dragonball Z



PART 2:

Strengths & Abilities: Flight, Super Elasticy Body, Ki (Energy) blasts, Regeneration, Molecular Configuration (can change one thing to another), and Absorption



Weaknesses: Majin Buu has a low IQ, and can be fooled a lot easier than most things. He can't regenerate is all of his cells are destroyed at once. Also, he can't escape any type of strong psychic barrier (preferably ones that are meant to encase something) unless someone helps him from the outside. Buu has a weakness of cold temps, because he can be “frozen up” easily.



PART 3:

Note: In (), will be Proper names for thing and places during the DBZ sag that happened in the story.



Centuries ago, the dark wizard Bibidi created a monster that would fulfill his dark desire for domination of the universe. Bibidi himself was physically too weak to do anything on his own, but were he lacked in body he had in brains. His magic was strong enough to conquer most strong warriors in the universe. Once his beast was completed, he ran rampant and started to destroy everything around him. Bibidi controlled his beast down and soon it started to take the wizard's orders. When it wanted to at least. That monster was Majin buu.



When he was originally created he was on the puny side with scrawnier muscles and etc. But his power was none the less destructive. Bibidi's first target was the Land of the Kais, home to Bibidi's greatest enemies. There was four Kais, one guardian for each section of the universe (North, South, East and West) and their goodhearted leader Dian Kaito. One by one, three out of the original four Kai were mercilessly killed by Buu and Bibidi. Buu defeated the weaker of the two Kais (North and West), but used his absorption attack on the strongest (South), giving Buu more power (and muscles if you need a visual) than before.



When it was the last Kai's turn to fight (East Kai), Majin Buu made simple work of him. Before he could deliver the final blow, Dian Kaito intervened and stopped Buu before the East Kai could be struck down. Dian Kaito's powers reduced Buu to pieces, but he also used his absorption attack on his foe. But taking in Dian Kato had huge repercussions. His Muscular form was reduced to the appearance of an overweight sumo, with a brain slightly bigger than before.



Majin Buu had one weakness at that time. Bibidi sealed him a ball every time he moved him from planet to planet. Once he was sealed, the Kai of the East exacted his vengeance on Bibidi, and killed him. But Bibidi had a son, Babidi. Centuries later, Babidi came across Buu's ball on the planet Earth and plotted to regenerate Buu and continue his father's plans. Babidi, with the power to take over the minds of those with evil hearts easily made an army to get the required energy necessary for Buu’s rebirth.



Earth’s strongest fighters (Goku, and other Z warriors), allied with the Kai of the East, gave Babidi a challenge. But in the end, Buu was resurrected any Babidi made sure to short chasing chaos. Eventually, Buu proved to be more than Babidi could handle and killed his “master”. Buu used his powers to turn entire populations into nothing more than candy to eat at his delight. No one could stop him.



Eventually, Buu showed he had a good side by befriending Hercule, a self righteous man whose only strength was making himself look good. When dangerous bounty hunters came and attacked Buu’s friends, his anger rose to all time high and split Buu into two. One good, the other evil. After a heated fight, the evil Buu triumphed and absorbed his good half, making the evil buu stronger.



With Buu transformed into what we call “Super Buu”, he managed to destroy most of the remaining humans he hadn’t killed and appeared at the main nervous center of earth’s last defense (Kami’s lookout). Once he arrived, Buu killed off most of the people there by transforming them into candy. He sensed a great power at the lookout which he took for his own absorbing two powerful warriors (Gotenks, a fusion of Goten and Trunks and Piccolo). The remaining fighters were far too weak to stand up to Buu’s new power, but his new found power wore off in 30 minutes (Fused fighters can only remain fused for no more than 30 min.). Buu was not out yet and absorbed someone stronger (Gohan) and received another power boost. However, the final Z fighters used a Kai fusion (Goku and Vegeta) and became a new warrior (Vegito). However, this fusion was permanent, unlike the last one. Buu’s new powers were no match for this new warrior, so Buu absorbed him too.



Vegito managed to survive buu’s trap and found himself inside the monster’s body. Vegito separated back into Goku and Vegeta, which both agreed to never fuse again. After getting to Buu’s brain, they separated their comrades and planned to escape. But they also separated the Good Buu who was also absorbed by his evil counterpart. The removal of the Good Buu caused a chain reaction which caused Buu to have another transformation. It caused him to revert back to his first state. With no logic or self control, Buu destroyed the earth and everything on it. However, the Kai of the East transported Goku, Vegeta, Hercule and his dog to land of the Kais.



Buu shortly followed, and the final battle began. Goku and etc. tired to destroy Buu, but they couldn’t mangage to keep him down. However, Buu was defeated by a Sprit Bomb (Goku’s Greatest attack) which completely destoryed Buu. Without a cell left, he couldn’t regenerate. He was dead for good. Buu was rencarated as a human after the Earth was wished back with the Dragonballs (mystical orbs which grant the user 1-3 wishes).



Well, I guess I couldn't make this brief. Sorry about that.

Here is what he looks like, incase you needed to know....

[DarkJuno]

Well...you definitely gave the story, but that's it. All you did was give me a synopsis of the saga, and while that's all well and good, you're telling me nothing of the character itself, or how it was shaped through these events. It may as well just be a background person since it never seems important even in its own tale.

Expand upon what was given and tell me how these things affected it, in detail, and not just with a bunch of re-tellings.

Start Working.

[JRPomazon]

I wasn't sure to start a new thead or not. So i'll give you my updated version.
Please, if you find any problems, tell me.

PART 1:
Name: Majin Buu (Super Buu)
Race: Unknown
Age: N/A (doesn’t age)
Height: 7' 0
Weight: 150 lbs.
Hair Color: N/A (no hair)
Eye Color: Red (with black where the white would be)
Build: Muscular upper and lower body.
Origin: Dragonball Z

PART 2:
Strengths & Abilities: Flight, Super Elasticy Body, Ki (Energy) blasts, Regeneration, Molecular Configuration (can change one thing to another), and Absorption

Weaknesses: Majin Buu has a low IQ, and can be fooled a lot easier than most things. He can't regenerate is all of his cells are destroyed at once. Also, he can't escape any type of strong psychic barrier (preferably ones that are meant to encase something) unless someone helps him from the outside. Buu has a weakness of cold temps, because he can be “frozen up” easily. Buu will do anything for candy. A “sweet” bribe may give you his services.

PART 3:
Note: In (), will be Proper names for thing and places during the DBZ sag that happened in the story.

Centuries ago, the dark wizard Bibidi created a monster that would fulfill his dark desire for domination of the universe. Bibidi himself was physically too weak to do anything on his own, but were he lacked in body he had in brains. His magic was strong enough to conquer most strong warriors in the universe. Once his beast was completed, he ran rampant and started to destroy everything around him. He was irrational and destructive, with nothing but instincts telling him to kill. Bibidi controlled his beast down and soon it started to take the wizard's orders. When it wanted to at least. That monster was Majin buu.

When he was originally created he was on the puny side with scrawnier muscles and etc. But his power was none the less destructive. Bibidi's first target was the Land of the Kais, home to Bibidi's greatest enemies. There was four Kais, one guardian for each section of the universe (North, South, East and West) and their goodhearted leader Dian Kaito. One by one, three out of the original four Kai were mercilessly killed by Buu and Bibidi. The more and more Buu killed the more relentless and dark he became. Buu defeated the weaker of the two Kais (North and West), but used his absorption attack on the strongest (South), giving Buu more power (and muscles if you need a visual) than before. He couldn’t except the fact that someone could best him, and greedily took his opponent’s power for his own. It seemed that the only thing that he knew was to kill, which was the only thing that gave him joy.

When it was the last Kai's turn to fight (East Kai), Majin Buu made simple work of him. Before he could deliver the final blow, Dian Kaito intervened and stopped Buu before the East Kai could be struck down. Dian Kaito's powers reduced Buu to pieces, but he also used his absorption attack on his foe. But taking in Dian Kato had huge repercussions. His Muscular form was reduced to the appearance of an overweight sumo, with a brain of a young toddler. His dark and evil personality seemed to fade away after the absorption and he seemed to become more gentle and kind. But, he was still driven by the urge to kill.

Majin Buu had one weakness at that time. Bibidi sealed him a ball every time he moved him from planet to planet. Once he was sealed, the Kai of the East exacted his vengeance on Bibidi, and killed him. But Bibidi had a son, Babidi. Centuries later, Babidi came across Buu's ball on the planet Earth and plotted to regenerate Buu and continue his father's plans. Babidi, with the power to take over the minds of those with evil hearts easily made an army to get the required energy necessary for Buu’s rebirth.

Earth’s strongest fighters (Goku, and other Z warriors), allied with the Kai of the East, gave Babidi a challenge. But in the end, Buu was resurrected and Babidi made sure to start chasing chaos. Buu was still as gleeful as the day he was sealed centuries before, happy and joyful as if it were a toddler. But, he was still influenced by a hatred for all things. Eventually, Buu proved to be more than Babidi could handle and killed his “master”. Buu used his powers to turn entire populations into nothing more than candy to eat at his delight. No one could stop him. And Buu knew that quite well.

Eventually, Buu showed he had a good side by befriending Hercule, a self righteous man whose only strength was making himself look good. Hercule asked Buu why he killed people; Buu just simply replied that it was what his masters told him to do. Hercule told buu he didn’t have to kill people; The Pink monster had a revelation. He didn’t have to kill people anymore, due to the fact that no one had told him too. Buu promised Hercule that he would never kill again. It was like a burden was finally lifted from his shoulders and Buu finally felt happy. But when bounty hunters attacked his friends, his anger rose to all time high and split Buu into two. One good, the other evil. After a heated fight, the evil Buu triumphed and absorbed his good half, making the evil buu stronger. All the good was erased from the beast and became a true being of evil. Like before all thought of reason left his mind and became totally focused with killing once again.

With Buu transformed into what we call “Super Buu”, he managed to destroy most of the remaining humans he hadn’t killed and appeared at the main nervous center of earth’s last defense (Kami’s lookout). Once he arrived, Buu killed off most of the people there by transforming them into candy. If Buu loved something more than killing, it would be candy. He sensed a great power at the lookout which he took for his own absorbing two powerful warriors (Gotenks, a fusion of Goten and Trunks and Piccolo). As he did before, Buu absorbed anyone who could pose a threat to his existence. And with the strength of Gotenks and the knowledge of Piccolo, he had become more powerful than his creator could have ever imagined. With an evil heart, an unimaginable strength and a brilliant mind, Buu had become a darker creature. But even with all the changes he went through, he still only wanted to be the best and to kill everything that got in his way. This new power has caused him to become confident in his current status.

The remaining fighters (that weren’t at the lookout) were far too weak to stand up to Buu’s new power, but it wore off in 30 minutes (Fused fighters can only remain fused for no more than 30 min.). Buu was not out yet and absorbed the strongest person remaining in his way (Gohan) and received another power boost. Now being the strongest warrior on the field, Buu new goal was to destroy all life and to become the sole proprietor of the universe. It seemed that he had become too evil to go back to the way he was. However, the final Z fighters used a Kai fusion (Goku and Vegeta) and became a new warrior (Vegito). However, this fusion was permanent, unlike the last one. Buu’s new power was no match for Vegito, and was thrown around like a rag doll. With his pride damaged, Buu took the easy way out and decided to trap Vegito within himself.

Vegito managed to survive buu’s trap and found himself inside the monster’s body. Vegito separated back into Goku and Vegeta, which both agreed to never fuse again. After getting to Buu’s brain, they separated their comrades from Buu, feeding off their strengths, and planned to escape. But they also separated the Good Buu who was also absorbed by his evil counterpart. The removal of the Good Buu caused a chain reaction which caused Buu to have another transformation. Buu felt pain and stress that no creature could survive and slowly lost all that he had gained. His mind was slipping away, seem by seem, and it had seemed that he was becoming weaker than before. His very being was being rewritten. It caused him to revert back to his first state. He was once again, a mindless monster, with who lusted for death and destruction. With no logic or self control, Buu destroyed the earth and everything on it. However, the Kai of the East transported Goku, Vegeta, and Hercule to land of the Kais.

Buu shortly followed, and the final battle began. Goku and etc. tired to destroy Buu, but they couldn’t manage to keep him down. His had a one purpose mind feeling no remorse for what he destroyed. He only wanted to see his opponent die. Buu’s good half resurfaced and became completely separate from his evil self. With a sense of Justice the fat, good buu gave his shot at destroying his evil half. But even Goku, Vegeta and Good Buu couldn’t stop him. Dark Buu had complete confidence that he would kill everyone on that planet. However, Buu was defeated by a Sprit Bomb (Goku’s greatest attack) which completely destroyed Buu. Without a cell left, he couldn’t regenerate. He was dead for good. Buu was reincarnated as a human after the Earth was wished back with the Dragonballs (mystical orbs which grant the user 1-3 wishes).

[DarkJuno]

...italics?

[JRPomazon]

This Character Submission will be the end of me. I just know it.:tombstone





PART 1:
Name: Majin Buu (Super Buu)
Race: Unknown
Age: N/A (doesn’t age)
Height: 7' 0
Weight: 150 lbs.
Hair Color: N/A (no hair)
Eye Color: Red (with black where the white would be)
Build: Muscular upper and lower body.
Origin: Dragonball Z

PART 2:
Strengths & Abilities: Flight, Super Elasticy Body, Ki (Energy) blasts, Regeneration, Molecular Configuration (can change one thing to another), and Absorption

Weaknesses: Majin Buu has a low IQ, and can be fooled a lot easier than most things. He can't regenerate is all of his cells are destroyed at once. Also, he can't escape any type of strong psychic barrier (preferably ones that are meant to encase something) unless someone helps him from the outside. Buu has a weakness of cold temps, because he can be “frozen up” easily. Buu will do anything for candy. A “sweet” bribe may give you his services.

PART 3:
Note: In (), will be Proper names for thing and places during the DBZ sag that happened in the story.

Centuries ago, the dark wizard Bibidi created a monster that would fulfill his dark desire for domination of the universe. Bibidi himself was physically too weak to do anything on his own, but were he lacked in body he had in brains. His magic was strong enough to conquer most strong warriors in the universe. Once his beast was completed, he ran rampant and started to destroy everything around him. He was irrational and destructive, with nothing but instincts telling him to kill. Bibidi controlled his beast down and soon it started to take the wizard's orders. When it wanted to at least. That monster was Majin buu.

When he was originally created he was on the puny side with scrawnier muscles and etc. But his power was none the less destructive. Bibidi's first target was the Land of the Kais, home to Bibidi's greatest enemies. There was four Kais, one guardian for each section of the universe (North, South, East and West) and their goodhearted leader Dian Kaito. One by one, three out of the original four Kai were mercilessly killed by Buu and Bibidi. The more and more Buu killed the more relentless and dark he became. Buu defeated the weaker of the two Kais (North and West), but used his absorption attack on the strongest (South), giving Buu more power (and muscles if you need a visual) than before. He couldn’t except the fact that someone could best him, and greedily took his opponent’s power for his own. It seemed that the only thing that he knew was to kill, which was the only thing that gave him joy.

When it was the last Kai's turn to fight (East Kai), Majin Buu made simple work of him. Before he could deliver the final blow, Dian Kaito intervened and stopped Buu before the East Kai could be struck down. Dian Kaito's powers reduced Buu to pieces, but he also used his absorption attack on his foe. But taking in Dian Kato had huge repercussions. His Muscular form was reduced to the appearance of an overweight sumo, with a brain of a young toddler. His dark and evil personality seemed to fade away after the absorption and he seemed to become more gentle and kind. But, he was still driven by the urge to kill.

Majin Buu had one weakness at that time. Bibidi sealed him a ball every time he moved him from planet to planet. Once he was sealed, the Kai of the East exacted his vengeance on Bibidi, and killed him. But Bibidi had a son, Babidi. Centuries later, Babidi came across Buu's ball on the planet Earth and plotted to regenerate Buu and continue his father's plans. Babidi, with the power to take over the minds of those with evil hearts easily made an army to get the required energy necessary for Buu’s rebirth.

Earth’s strongest fighters (Goku, and other Z warriors), allied with the Kai of the East, gave Babidi a challenge. But in the end, Buu was resurrected and Babidi made sure to start chasing chaos. Buu was still as gleeful as the day he was sealed centuries before, happy and joyful as if it were a toddler. But, he was still influenced by a hatred for all things. Eventually, Buu proved to be more than Babidi could handle and killed his “master”. Buu used his powers to turn entire populations into nothing more than candy to eat at his delight. No one could stop him. And Buu knew that quite well.

Eventually, Buu showed he had a good side by befriending Hercule, a self righteous man whose only strength was making himself look good. Hercule asked Buu why he killed people; Buu just simply replied that it was what his masters told him to do. Hercule told buu he didn’t have to kill people; The Pink monster had a revelation. He didn’t have to kill people anymore, due to the fact that no one had told him too. Buu promised Hercule that he would never kill again. It was like a burden was finally lifted from his shoulders and Buu finally felt happy. But when bounty hunters attacked his friends, his anger rose to all time high and split Buu into two. One good, the other evil. After a heated fight, the evil Buu triumphed and absorbed his good half, making the evil buu stronger. All the good was erased from the beast and became a true being of evil. Like before all thought of reason left his mind and became totally focused with killing once again.

With Buu transformed into what we call “Super Buu”, he managed to destroy most of the remaining humans he hadn’t killed and appeared at the main nervous center of earth’s last defense (Kami’s lookout). Once he arrived, Buu killed off most of the people there by transforming them into candy. If Buu loved something more than killing, it would be candy. He sensed a great power at the lookout which he took for his own absorbing two powerful warriors (Gotenks, a fusion of Goten and Trunks and Piccolo). As he did before, Buu absorbed anyone who could pose a threat to his existence. And with the strength of Gotenks and the knowledge of Piccolo, he had become more powerful than his creator could have ever imagined. With an evil heart, an unimaginable strength and a brilliant mind, Buu had become a darker creature. But even with all the changes he went through, he still only wanted to be the best and to kill everything that got in his way. This new power has caused him to become confident in his current status.

The remaining fighters (that weren’t at the lookout) were far too weak to stand up to Buu’s new power, but it wore off in 30 minutes (Fused fighters can only remain fused for no more than 30 min.). Buu was not out yet and absorbed the strongest person remaining in his way (Gohan) and received another power boost. Now being the strongest warrior on the field, Buu new goal was to destroy all life and to become the sole proprietor of the universe. It seemed that he had become too evil to go back to the way he was. However, the final Z fighters used a Kai fusion (Goku and Vegeta) and became a new warrior (Vegito). However, this fusion was permanent, unlike the last one. Buu’s new power was no match for Vegito, and was thrown around like a rag doll. With his pride damaged, Buu took the easy way out and decided to trap Vegito within himself by absorbtion.

Vegito managed to survive buu’s trap and found himself inside the monster’s body. Vegito separated back into Goku and Vegeta, which both agreed to never fuse again. After getting to Buu’s brain, they separated their comrades from Buu, feeding off their strengths, and planned to escape. But they also separated the Good Buu who was also absorbed by his evil counterpart. The removal of the Good Buu caused a chain reaction which caused Buu to have another transformation. Buu felt pain and stress that no creature could survive and slowly lost all that he had gained. His mind was slipping away, seem by seem, and it had seemed that he was becoming weaker than before. His very being was being rewritten. It caused him to revert back to his first state. He was once again, a mindless monster, with who lusted for death and destruction. With no logic or self control, Buu destroyed the earth and everything on it. However, the Kai of the East transported Goku, Vegeta, and Hercule to land of the Kais.

Buu shortly followed, and the final battle began. Goku and etc. tired to destroy Buu, but they couldn’t manage to keep him down. His had a one purpose mind feeling no remorse for what he destroyed. He only wanted to see his opponent die. Buu’s good half resurfaced and became completely separate from his evil self. With a sense of Justice the fat, good buu gave his shot at destroying his evil half. But even Goku, Vegeta and Good Buu couldn’t stop him. Dark Buu had complete confidence that he would kill everyone on that planet. However, Buu was defeated by a Sprit Bomb (Goku’s greatest attack) which completely destroyed Buu. Without a cell left, he couldn’t regenerate. He was dead for good. Buu was reincarnated as a human after the Earth was wished back with the Dragonballs (mystical orbs which grant the user 1-3 wishes). All the desturction that Buu had caused was revert to the way it was before his arrival, and forgot that Buu existed. But, the good Buu still lived on Earth in peace with Hercule.

[DarkJuno]

Good. You still need to beef up those details on how it affected his up bringing, but that's about as good as a DBZ character will ever get.

Keep it up.

[DarkJuno]

'Tis been over a week. Sorry, but try again.