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[Mystic Kitsune]

Done. Yay! ^^ There may be problems, but they should be minor. Thats the final, after 6 stages. Goes to show you how long it takes to make a decent picture.



I hope you like it 14 ^^

Edited by Mystic Kitsune, 31 August 2006 - 05:50 PM.

[31-Year-Old-From-Georgia]

*views thread within thirty minutes* Har. Hooray for lack of actual life!

Being all protective, I actually have a long list. Fake OCD and all.

-His shorts are super tight! I meant to draw them really baggy and loose-fitting in case that's not clear.
-Well, the shirt's supposed to have only one loop over his right shoulder in Tarzan fashion. I'm not even sure if that can work, but eh.
-The shirt's also white. You could put the blood stains from the "devil ball" if you want. XP
-A bit picky now, but the shirt's not tucked in and he doesn't wear a belt. Annoying, ain't I?
-Now I know I sound like I'm trying to make myself better-looking, but a bit more chest muscle wouldn't hurt.
-Yeah, he's supposed to be 13-16-ish. A more mature face also wouldn't be a pain. And he has a long nose, not sure if I've mentioned that in-text or not.

...Yeeeeeah, rather nitpicky. Sorry. ^^; But you asked for it.

Hehe, good work on 'im, though. With some tweaking it could some out awesomegreat. I so love the running-to-get-the-heck-outta-there vibe it screams. XD

Edited by 14-Year-Old, 30 August 2006 - 07:35 PM.

[Mystic Kitsune]

No no, its okay ^^ Id hate it if I got everything wrong. Ill get back to work on it right away. Im glad you liked the pose though.

(Its just that the words, "11" struck ultra young in my mind ^^)

*gets back to work.*

EDIT: Just be sure to check back for updates. Ill probably rename the thread to 2.0 or something xp

Edited by Mystic Kitsune, 30 August 2006 - 07:53 PM.

[Mystic Kitsune]

Updated. (Refer to first post)

Its still not complete, I stopped at this point, because I was wondering if you wanted anything else changed, 14.

Other people's opinions would help too, you know.

[Gabe Puratekuta]

Yeah, it looks pretty good. It's got kind of a "Swiss Family Robinson" vibe to it

[Ken the Wandering Soul]

The left side of his neck (his left) seems to go down too far, or his back seems to go up too high. He kinda looks like a hunchback that way. Besides that, other than the fingers and toes, I think it is good. The runnig actio is nice, and the torn clothes look real good.

[Mystic Kitsune]

I think I said earlier to avoid the hands and feet for now...because it still isnt complete

Yes, that hunch back problem bothers me to, in fact, enough to make me change it right now.

Thanks ^^

[Billy Goat]

He looks really good. If there's one thing that could be fixed, it's that his hair should be more like...messy. He is a pirate after all.

[31-Year-Old-From-Georgia]

And maybe a bit darker hair, too. *picky!*

But, yes, more accurate now. Like how it's progressing. ^^ Can't wait to see the final pic.

[Mystic Kitsune]

Okay, *notes down dark hair* Like dark as in black, or just greyish (seeing as its black and white...)

Anything else?

Edited by Mystic Kitsune, 31 August 2006 - 04:19 PM.

[31-Year-Old-From-Georgia]

Grayish. It's light brown.

And nope, nothing I can think of. Feel lucky.

EDIT: Oh, it seems you went ahead. XD

Edited by 14-Year-Old, 31 August 2006 - 04:30 PM.

[Mystic Kitsune]

Yeah, I did ^^; Well then, Ill be doing the final, fixing hands and feet then.

Hope you like it.

[Ken the Wandering Soul]

XI looks great--good job. I like it.

[Mystic Kitsune]

Thanks again, Ken ^^ I think Ill begin working on developing your chracter next.

[31-Year-Old-From-Georgia]

Heeee. <3

Very nice job. I would compliment more, but I'm fresh out of them.

Artists are perfectionists.

[Mystic Kitsune]

Thanks [img]http://forums.legendsalliance.com/public/ALOT.png[/img] 14 ^^ *moves on to next character*

Youll be seeing him in scenes soon enough.