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#1 ~Light Goddess~

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Posted 08 August 2006 - 03:35 PM

Name: Lena (no one knows her surname)

Age: Looks to be around 16-18

Gender: Female

Species: Human/Deity or Goddess, however you see it

Home: Her old home was the small village of Pyna, found in the lands in the north. She lived with the leader of the village and his wife until she was old enough to embark into the world on her own. She plans to visit them every once in awhile.

Ability Style: Light (magic or holy) priestess, close-range combat

Weapon: Carries a small dagger with her just in case around her upper leg.
Would look something like this:
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Ability: Has the upper advantage if in sunlight or in moonlight. She has trained herself in the ways of combat and has performed new ways of excorcism never witnessed to date. Can also purify and heal things.

Weakness: Her only weakness is the darkness itself, if foe uses darkness as his/hers strength, it can slowly weaken Lena if she doesn't fight back. She also has a misadvantage if the enemy attacks from far away. Lena doesn't have a bow or a cross bow yet.

Description: Lena is about 5"7, with a light blue/blonde or periwinkle long hair, with bangs and side bangs. A few strands of her hair are braided on her left. She has purple eyes, and has a soft, glowly skin. She has a basic structure with wider hips. I quickly drew a picture of her, so here's how she'd basically look like. I drew her holding a cape behind her.
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Storyline: New to the lands in the south, she has been referred to by the lucky ones saved by her as "The Light Goddess", she has begun to make a name for herself. Lena was found just outside of her home village as a baby orphan by the Leader and his wife, who weren't able to have children. They saw the baby as some sort of a sign, and raised her in their household. She was a bright, enigmatic girl, always interested in things she didn't know or how to do, and when she turned seven, she realized she harnessed some kind of magical abilities inside of her. When she prayed or meditated, she felt as if she was in total happiness. When she turned 11 She had decided to become a female priestess and would vanquish the world that begun to grow in darkness as much as a single person could do. At age 14 she started to train with the village's priest and along with a few others, was granted to become a priest or priestess. Her surrogate parents wanted her to marry so that they would have heirs after her, but she wouldn't allow herself to be just married off to someone she didn't even know. When she turned 16, she took her things, and decided it was time to start her journey. She ran away from home one night leaving a note explaining why, and from there she started travelling from village to village, exterminating demons and healing the sick. She now realizes her reasons here, and why she has been reincarnated once again as she has many times before...

So...is this good enough for a character?

#2 DarkJuno

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Posted 17 August 2006 - 08:41 PM

It's a good start, to be sure, but as is obvious if you look around, I'm a stickler for balancing out strengths and weaknesses. While it's not horribly off-scale, the weaknesses don't really make up for the strengths, so try to fix that.

You'll be good after that, I suppose.




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