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#1 Niko

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Posted 29 July 2006 - 09:00 AM

Name: Raptor
Race: Mutagenic, but Human
Gender: Male
Age: Between 17 and 20
Height: 6 feet
Weight: 200 lbs
Hair Color/Style: Brown hair like Harry Potter in normal form, none in superhero form
Eye Color: blue in human, yellow in superhero form
Build: Has the build of an olympic sprinter, although slightly more muscular
Origin: n/a

Strengths & Abilities:
- Can turn into something like a humanoid raptor (hence, his name). He has the head and scales, but lacks tail.
- Martial Arts expert
- Can sense heat just by sniffing the air, so he can see in the dark
- Retractable, foot-long claws made of a combination of adamantium and solid steel
- Retractable claw on each foot like a velociraptor
- Can shoot claws like arrows at will and regenerate them in thirty minutes' time.
- Superhuman strength: He can lift ten times his own body weight
- Adamantium/ steel alloy skeleton
- Sharp teeth
- Enhanced human performance. He can run, climb, and swim faster than an athlete
- Can scale sheer surfaces by clinging on with his claws.

Weaknesses:
- Vulnerable to magnetism
- If he shoots his claws, it takes a while for them to grow back

Biography: Raptor was the victim of a nuclear explosion at a research center to bring back enhanced dinosaurs. Some of his friends got a small amount of it, but he got a pretty bad blast of the stuff. When he turned into his raptor mode for the first time, he didn't want his girlfriend to see him in the state, so he made his escape. Later, his girlfriend found out and she didn't care if Raptor was dinosaur or human as long as he was the man inside. Now he willingly works alone or with a team called "The Metallix".

Well, is this better than last time?

Edited by Niko, 29 July 2006 - 09:02 AM.


#2 DarkJuno

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Posted 17 August 2006 - 08:33 PM

Primus no. The weaknesses are horrid and don't even remotely balance out the excessive strengths. The bio is also pitiful - I don't ask for much anymore, but that's just bad. Fix it.




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